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Hey Pink! I'm back! :3 This was wonderful! Pinky, you're improving so much with your writing and while reading this I could actually feel that this piece is published. As ...

Heyo Hockey! :) I was supposed to get your review done earlier, but my computer died on me so I couldn't. But here I am, ain't I? :wink: She is ...

Dudette! Somewhere I found a link to this and couldn't stop myself from reviewing. I haven't reviewed for you before so I can't wait to see what you have to ...

Skinsy! I finally managed to come here! And I feel great about it, believe me. :3 I haven't seen any other reviews so pardon me if I write something which ...

Hey, Shear! :3 I'm finally here! lol. She begged, hoping she wasn’t in the same psychotic facility You posted this line separately and in that way, it didn't make any ...

Hey Megan! I have to say I am terribly sorry for getting this late to your story. I hope it wasn't really a trouble for you. Since you've got so ...

Hey, Summer! I am terribly sorry for getting to your writing so late, but my computer wasn't working so I had to wait. I hope the review I give is ...

Hey Vyper! :) You don't need to feel sorry or worried about the fact if your story's going to look good. Even if it isn't, you just need to post ...

Hey LumI! Here to review on request. I'll keep it short. :) He turned away from his opponent, a raven-haired young woman very much like the fifty year old man ...

Hey Wicki! Thanks for requesting. I hope you get a good review from me. Those apartments, especially, he hated: the neat pale-cream cube blocks with floral-patterned curtains and green lawn ...

Hey Satan! So this was funny. lol. You had a good easy flow in your writing which I liked the most. As this is very much clear, it's a humorous ...

Hey, Spark! I saw you had posted this so just came to review. Hope I am of some help. Prologue: This was amazing. I really could see the scene. To ...

Hey Kafka! I am so sorry for getting to this so late. :) You had a big problem with commas in the story. There were many instances where I couldn't ...

Hey, Skye! Here to review you. :) I hope I could be of some help. First of all, the way you wrote 'wife's vacant spot' it was hard to understand. ...

Hey Uranium. Just saw you posted something so came to review. I hope I help. :wink: The pews were packed tight with men with suits to o tight for them, ...