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Hi there. i will be your reviewer for today. Well, if it was for a short story assignment then it was good butthere was so much you could have explained ...

HI Maegardens. I really liked he story and wold wish you to never stop writing this. PM me when you have more. Can't wait to see where it goes. " ...

I am only 15 and so far I’ve become the world’s strongest being. [b]At least in this world.You see, I live on a planet that has 3 moons. /b] When ...

Hey Isha. I am finally here to read your second post, a story. I liked your story but just one thing. Was the man in third part the same one ...

This seems so much like I Am Ledgend... and as i said before, you need to add more. I completely agree with Biffle. Why everyone here is after Will Smith ...

This day was turning out to be pretty unfortunate…wasn’t it ? Okay, so your writing style is not very good and I found many mistakes which can be solved by ...

Hi BigM I liked the story a lo but I think it was too short to be called a prologue. Maybe you cna add more things as to how Jess ...

Ha! You gave a beautiful surprise ending with a thriller. The suspense! It was very difficult to point out mistakes from your piece. You write simply and still touch the ...

Welcome to YWS first. So this is your first post here and I will be your first reviewer. I will copy all the story and tell you the errors which ...

Hi. I am here to review. I loved the concept of the story and the setting. I could actually imagine all this and for some time I was transported to ...

Hi there. You have definitely made a progress sine the prologue. Okay, you named it Nightmares but there was nothing to do with it. The stoy is going fine.Here are ...

Hey Quetseli. This story is awesome. I loved it. You are creating a new type of species and you will give them your own created history which is amazing. I ...

Hi fictionfanatic.I loved your story. You wrote it beautifully and I could feel and picture everything happening there. For the dialogue, you can write them in singe-single line instead of ...

A n hour later I woke up the hospital, except I was looking at my disorientated body. Hour is a silent vowel. it has a sound of 'aa' The later ...

Hi Kanen. it's the first time here I have read a story with an animal character. It was refreshing. I liked the concept. i think you are going to continue ...