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Hi there Tiffany. Sorry it took me so long to review your story but I thought the story would be a bit more clear if I read the first chapter. ...

Hey there Tiffany. You have been too kind and helpful to me in past few days and I would love tor return back the favor. I would review here first ...

Hi Red Raven there. I have been seeing you posting your novel Killer Mask here from some time. I wanted to review it but you have posted so many chapters ...

Hey yuriko1234. I saw this being on post a lot of times before but then just didn't review it but today I wanted to review something short so just came ...

Hello Jasmine. I'm here again, couldn't wait to read this. Firstly, lets get on to the nit-picks: She ignored her and kept walking. So you ended the previous part of ...

Hey there undertheshadow. I wanted to read this novel from a long time but then I didn't get time. Really, I was intrigued by reading the synopsis to it. Chapter-1 ...

Hi Jasmine. Here on request. I usually don;t do poetry reviews but this was a request and I don't ignore it. Sorry, if my review doesn't make much sense to ...

Hi Sara. Here on request. I am no poet or poetry expert but I would try to give my best review. I have to say that you would have been ...

Hi there. Here to review. Susan screamed, she threw her hands to her face, peeking through her fingers, staring at her dead husband lying on the leaf-littered floor You portrayed ...

Hi ReadySetStay. Nice username, huh. I came to read your story after reading the synopsis to it. It was informative and made me read more so here I came :D ...

Hi Jasmine. Why you didn't PM me or dropped a request? Please, do it the next time you write anything. :) First for the title, I think that you should ...

Hi KAH. Since, you haven't got any detailed reviews, I would be glad to help you out. Any corrections or additions I make will be in green and the things ...

Hi Jasmine. This is going to be interesting and don't forget to PM me when you post next. I'm liking her mother's character. You could have described her mother's distorted ...

Coming back into the orphanage dining area with a picture of my siblings and me, updated every year, I saw that Grace and Grant were waiting. “Okay, now we wait ...

Hi Aliza. I'm here on chapter-2 now. So this was pretty much sort so convenient for me to review. I won't say I liked it or i din't coz' there ...