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Re: Fire-bird chapters prologue and chapter 1
Hey Point! :) Prologue: What I think of it is a sweet introduction to the novel, which is short but you can add in more melodrama to it. Prologues are ...
Dec 2, 2010 -
Re: Taboo [14]
Hey Pink, Shubhi here to review. There were tears leaking from the corner of her eyes and I knew those weren’t from physical pain but from the thought that she ...
Nov 28, 2010 -
Re: Can You See Me? (Chapter One)
Hey Rhian! Shubhi here. I'll review now. If his sister didn’t stay up so late, he’d have just been able to leave his room through the door, sneak downstairs, maybe ...
Nov 28, 2010 -
Re: Deleted
Hey Tams! Here I am to review you. I hope I don't disappoint you. October 2nd 2005 When you're giving the whole date, you include a comma after the date ...
Nov 24, 2010 -
Re: Blood Stains (From my novel)
Hey Gheala, here I am. I hope I am of some true help to you. Her horrified dead eyes and the blue color of her skin weren’t what ripped my ...
Nov 22, 2010 -
Re: Taboo [13] End Part One
Hey there, Pinky! So don't think I was waiting for your request to come and then I was planning on to review this-not at all. Dad! My feet continued down ...
Nov 20, 2010 -
Re: Can You See Me? (Prologue)
Hey Skins, here to review! The operating room doors hesitantly opened, revealing a rather small man wearing a green surgeon’s outfit. Um, this sounded kind of weird. Like the doors ...
Nov 19, 2010 -
Re: Alezrani chapter 1
Hey there Idra, Shubhi here to review. Late, but finally here. So yay! lol The coffee shop, Esnatzen, was empty when Seres walked in; the moss green carpet, filled with ...
Nov 18, 2010 -
Re: The Lockets -- Chapter 2 [Snowflake]
Hey there Jash! Sorry it took me so long, when you had reviewed my piece instantly. Thanks for that and I am here now! :) My first point here would ...
Nov 11, 2010 -
Re: White Eyes (part one)
Hey Ignis, and thanks for the request. This is not related to the review but every time I read your name, I think it's Enrique Iglesias. LOL, I know, but ...
Nov 8, 2010 -
Re: A Shot of Arrogance (Chapter Sixteen)
Heya Skins! Yo! PMed Chapters: Certainly, I really enjoyed reading them and they were really good. The one thing I found lacking in them all or rather so much used ...
Nov 6, 2010 -
Re: The Lockets Book Trailer *NEW with screenshots*
Jashhhy!!!! Man, how did you do that? It was awesome in every way-as mom and dad have rightly said. Do not ignore them, or we would have to drink that ...
Nov 1, 2010 -
Re: The Lockets -- Chapter I
Hey Jash! Shubhi here to review. Sorry it took me time, but it was real long. It was a dull afternoon in late autumn when you could watch the remaining ...
Oct 24, 2010 -
Re: Salmon Merlot (EDITED)
Hey Jade, here to review on request. For your question, I do review poetry but on request since I am not an expert at it. But I need to improve ...
Oct 22, 2010 -
Re: Call of the Dragon-Prologue Newly Revised
Hey there, Lily. Yay, you got featured. :D I looked at this and wondered why shouldn't I read it. LOL. So here I am! The only sound that could be ...
Oct 18, 2010