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Haba not us reviewing each other at the same time xD

Ah yes, that adds up. I think it would make it even better, even though it's already a nice piece

hi there! It's a shame this has been inthe Green Room for so long, because I think it deserves more people reading it :) my mother gave me this pearl ...

Thanks for reading through, Vamp. I'll make sure to correct that typo and glad you enjoyed the story

Thank you Cupid! You made some good points about the atmosphere and mood. I went ahead and posted the 2nd and last part whenever you have time to check them ...

Yikes not as many as I had typing this on my phone

Ir swear I fixed that reality's line like 4 times BUT it is fixed in my microsoft document finally LOL It's really interesting how you took the monster in the ...

why did I never reply to this. I've read this review many times haha and this poem will be inserted into draft 1.2 very soon ;P

Hi there! Thanks for stopping by. This whole thing came from me envisioning a lightssber duel on ice, but I don't do fan-fic so I wrote this instead. I do ...

@soundofmind could you be troubled to look at this?

hi imp, thanks for the review! :) I agree with the powers of Zora. I think if I were to come back to this world I would flesh out how ...

i do love Lovecraft vibes so thanks for that shoutout :P

Oh yeah sometimes the publishing center gobbles up formatting for whatever reason. Happens to me a lot in poetry and lyrics

@Alliyah or some mod can you delete this?