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I would love to hear your thoughts on part 2 and 3!

Thank you : ) he is a big boi

Thank you. Long your profile picture and username

Aha! I knew it xD

Hey there! Happy Review Day. If there's one thing it's seems even this passage agrees on, it's that unlike angels, we all have free will, so here I am. I'm ...

Haba not us reviewing each other at the same time xD

Ah yes, that adds up. I think it would make it even better, even though it's already a nice piece

hi there! It's a shame this has been inthe Green Room for so long, because I think it deserves more people reading it :) my mother gave me this pearl ...

Thanks for reading through, Vamp. I'll make sure to correct that typo and glad you enjoyed the story

Thank you Cupid! You made some good points about the atmosphere and mood. I went ahead and posted the 2nd and last part whenever you have time to check them ...

Yikes not as many as I had typing this on my phone

Ir swear I fixed that reality's line like 4 times BUT it is fixed in my microsoft document finally LOL It's really interesting how you took the monster in the ...

why did I never reply to this. I've read this review many times haha and this poem will be inserted into draft 1.2 very soon ;P

Hi there! Thanks for stopping by. This whole thing came from me envisioning a lightssber duel on ice, but I don't do fan-fic so I wrote this instead. I do ...