Messenger

Loved it.

That was beautiful!

Thank you that helps!!! You might want to read the sequel. ;)

This chapter is un-edited, so don't feel the need to point out the overuse of commas. When I wrote this I wasn't to learned in the use of commas. :)

Most of what you say is right. I never have edited any of these chapters, so the commas make sense. I used to be a commaholic. The age group is ...

Thanks for the review. Snickers is not the main character. Keep reading to find out more. There are lots of characters.

Thanks for the review. Snickers is the main character. Keep reading to find out more.

Hehehe. Hilarious. Just came off watching three of the four Tolkien movies, so Gollum is fresh in my mind. Great poem.

Oh, I for got, these lines nearly broke me down to tears: v= Do you know the feeling, To be nineteen and write your rown will...? Do you know the ...

And it didn't give me the spacing!!! forget it.

Thanks Industrio! do you have a nickname that is shorter?

Yah, I see whatcha mean. Will look into it.

Thanks for the review. OK, so I agree with most of your stuff, in fact the only thing I didn't agree with was the Sir. If he didn't call him ...

Yes I did. Sorry for not making that clear. Just add little snippets here and there. You, maybe she wiped away a strand of her black hair, and just little ...

Gotcha, and good.