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hahaha. Yes, not a blonde black bear

Thank you!Glad to hear that this story is enjoyable. will hop on those nitpicks soon!

Thank you Aley. Yes the haiku and all that stuff has since been told to me and I now know the difference. Shows how Much YWS has helped! Actually, I ...

I think you should all take a look at Nate's review.

Well I say welcome Basilisk, but I think you need to watch what you say in your reviews. Reviews are too help the writer advance his writing skills, and writing ...

Thank you Lucrezia! This was written quickly, because, funny as it may seem, this idea popped in my head and I thought "hey i will write this sometime today!" and ...

Hey Mangeta, thanks for the review. You were an amazing teammate, out-reviewing me! The links cannot be changed. They are like a bug. Sorry.

You are welcome!

well for the tor I would put a * next to it and have a note about it beneath, that way people know. I've done that before and people appreciate ...

Thank you! YWS has a knack for deleting extra lines. the POV switches were quite obvious when I wrote it out on Microsoft. I apologize for that! Yes the pirates ...

You don't know how much this means to me!

it's so wrong that people can even gets points for reviewing this :)

i saw the word limit part later. It makes sense. For it being so short I think you did well.

I had that feeling at one point as well. Actually, writing a poem that is about your grandpa is petty unique. I've yet to read one before.

I thought it might have been a family member. I suppose people just suspect it to be romantic automatically.