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For further readings, the Middle East part was merely a joke. It does not have a ton to do wit the poem other than it is a place of violence ...

no it isn't.

Too good to review!

Thank you timmy! I was hoping that this would be a surprise. Seeing as it is a sequel, not like the next part. Hopefully it threw you off the tracks!

hahaha. Yes, not a blonde black bear

Thank you!Glad to hear that this story is enjoyable. will hop on those nitpicks soon!

Thank you Aley. Yes the haiku and all that stuff has since been told to me and I now know the difference. Shows how Much YWS has helped! Actually, I ...

I think you should all take a look at Nate's review.

Well I say welcome Basilisk, but I think you need to watch what you say in your reviews. Reviews are too help the writer advance his writing skills, and writing ...

Thank you Lucrezia! This was written quickly, because, funny as it may seem, this idea popped in my head and I thought "hey i will write this sometime today!" and ...

Hey Mangeta, thanks for the review. You were an amazing teammate, out-reviewing me! The links cannot be changed. They are like a bug. Sorry.

You are welcome!

well for the tor I would put a * next to it and have a note about it beneath, that way people know. I've done that before and people appreciate ...

Thank you! YWS has a knack for deleting extra lines. the POV switches were quite obvious when I wrote it out on Microsoft. I apologize for that! Yes the pirates ...