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ah that makes more sense. I think if you added more about "doing something worth living for in honor of our soldiers" would help make it clearer. And I agree ...

Christian apologized and squeezed between two women who looked like ringmasters to get away. they looked like ringmasters to get away?

she was just nervous because it was her first time! I would be like first time driving, or first time riding a horse.

1, The king (as I stated) believes that dressing ridculously expensive in situations such as this, is stupid. He has no way of knowing whether or not he may need ...

thank you Shilver! i shall get dem nitpicks when I edit. I wasn't sure how you'd feel with me switching POV's all of a sudden, and as far as the ...

Jare-ick

he has two horses cuz he has a wagon full of stuff! The phrase was because i am in a contest and i had to use that phrase to get ...

hey, sorry it's confusing i know. Go to my portfolio and read Castor's Tale #2. I switched the order of the chapters and it'll be easier to follow.

you really do? *Sobs* Another one lost.

*mumbles and drools* dat wuz so good

i shall hop on those ideas! I agree with you 100%

glad you liked it!

You didn't . . .

Good!

thanks pinkie!!