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Thanks Noelle, I fixed it all up :)

Thanks Tri! I was planning on working on those spots!! I will certainly let you know when the next chapter comes out!! ~Messy

Thanks night! There is a bunch of action coming the next few chapters so hooooold on!

You two might be related O.o I will say that Ash's reasons will be explained more, but I can see how for now it doesn't make sense. Also, Tom is ...

Thank you tri! I'll hop on that part with the dad! ~Messy

It doesn't change anything biscy

Haha this was actually written by my co-writer, so i'll let her reply in more details. But trust me, there is action ;) thanks for reading! ~Messy

Definitely intriguing. No time for a long review but keep me informed

Thanks deanie beanie :) i have been writing, just not posting it. Much goodies await >.> as for this story it's on the back burner, but it will be cooked ...

Thanks Timmy! I haven't seen that movie, but I feel like I've heard of it. I'll try to add some more hints as to her job when I edit, because ...

thanks r4

Thank you Birk! Did the 40 people dying come across as like an assault on them? It wasn't, if that's what you think. Everything will be explained a little bit ...

Thanks birk. we'll definitely work on those suggestions!

thanks timmy!

thanks wolfie!