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Hey! Thanks for taking the time review! Those were some really good pointers that I'll work on and re-phrase. :) did you mean violent, or violet, when describing the poppy?? ...

ok awesome!

hey I'm finally back :P I like how you get his age in without being too telly to the audience. Using thoughts sparsely is a nice way to add subtle ...

thanks for the review! I will fix that sentence. Must've deleted the end of it accidentally. :) The Emerald will be explained more, but it's a lot of stuff to ...

Hey Thanks for stopping by and reviewing! I'm really glad to hear it was hooking and especially the part about the senses. I have, with the story, tried to put ...

thanks for reading! More will be explained later, I assure you :) I know not much is told of him, let alone a name, but it will come in time. ...

but it didn't diiiie!

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Hey Penguin, I've ben pretty busy so I haven't replied to your reviews, but thanks for sticking with this story! I'm planning on going back and doing some major revision ...

wOooooo. Dats a big review. Thanks nighty! :) A lot of what you said just reassured me of some editing I was planning on. I hope to come back at ...

Thanks Noelle, I fixed it all up :)

Thanks Tri! I was planning on working on those spots!! I will certainly let you know when the next chapter comes out!! ~Messy

Thanks night! There is a bunch of action coming the next few chapters so hooooold on!

You two might be related O.o I will say that Ash's reasons will be explained more, but I can see how for now it doesn't make sense. Also, Tom is ...

Thank you tri! I'll hop on that part with the dad! ~Messy