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Re: Eternal Beauty | Chapter 4
hi there, back for more The main building rose high, its gothic architecture formidable and impressive, almost as if it were alive, watching every newcomer with ancient, judgmental eyes. Intricate ...
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Re: Eternal Beauty | Chapter 3
Hiii back again. This time not expecting mystery and suspense ;p I really like Kukui. I like her more optimistic personality and the contrast it brings to Kei. I know ...
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Re: Eternal Beauty | Chapter 2
Back for more as promised! she’d said with a watery smile A watery smile? I'll be honest, I have no clue what that means. Has she been crying? Is it ...
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Re: Eternal Beauty | Prologue
Hi there and welcome to YWS! Happy Review Month. I saw the genre mystery and suspense, and honestly we dont get a lot of those so it caught my eye ...
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Re: my orion
Hi Lady! I've meant to read this for a while and I'm finally here for Happy Review Month the creature swimming through the water sitting at the bottom of my ...
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Re: Mundane Work (CHP 2) - The Price of Things
I'm back for chapter 2 as promised! Do you have a double-spiced macchiato with extra ice, two pumps of cream, half part almond milk, half part soy milk… actually cut ...
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Re: Mundane Work
Hi! Messy here. Office paranormal humor and horror sounds great, as a fan of the Winchester boys. And this seems to live in the same vein of keeping the public ...
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Re: Bad bloodlines: The culling house (wip title, name suggestions appreciated)
Hi there! This has been in the green room far too long! Let's remedy that. It was just above the thinly carpeted stairs that led up to the bedrooms, just ...
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Re: Casey Bardot-The trouble of Carlos
One more for the road, shall we? Sixteen year old Casey Bardot sat in the back of the car, watching the trees and houses go by I've noticed that you ...
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Re: Marcia’s origin: “Marcia Blythe’s dear love”
Hi creepy. You know the drill. Happy revmo This is a short piece so I don't have a ton to say, but I do have some. You use "who" twice ...
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Re: Mellowed by the sun
Hello hello and happy Review month. Is it as calming as the wake before the sun, or do you dig to find a new layer to call home? I like ...
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Re: 🕰️⚙️Factory’s end ⚙️🕰️
Yay I always love when you slap down some poetry. I think its an underrated part of your game. Shall we begin? Just a few sporadic thoughts. 1. Amelia Badelia ...
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Re: crows about surfing cow
Hi happy Review Day. Or in crow can caaaw caawww caw caaaw I cant believe im going to say this, but i found a typo. Maybe you should jist stick ...
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Re: Letter Two. Ayla's POV
Hi there! Happy Review Day. It's a shame this has sat for so long because I like this piece. Let's hope in to a couple of thoughts. You aren't dead; ...
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Re: The Wandering Cyborg, part 1.
Hi, welcome and happy Review Day. Time to get this out of the Green Room with a review! I tend to just jot stuff down chronologically and give some overall ...
Aug 30, 2025
