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Re: The Circle of Life (in the key of Em)
Knight Malachi here to review for Review Day. The forest winds its way from the wrist root to branches of fingers. There is mahogany in my knuckles, hammers that echo ...
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Re: Lords, Give Me Courage...
Knight Malachi here to review for Review Day. and one by one your backs have turned away. Now, I stand alone. At first I thought you should join the now ...
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Re: I Could Not Save You
Knight Malachi here to review for Review Day. gotta keep the blue team in the lead!!!! This is a good poem of how you can get lost in fame. And ...
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Re: Doom Making It's Way.
Knight Malachi here to review to keep blue team on this grand and glorious Review Day!!!!! First off the beginning makes it sounds like something disastrous is bound to happen, ...
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Re: Randomisty writing
Knight Malachi here to review both of these poems on Review Day. Go team blue!!!!!!! for Eternal: I really liked your rhyming. It flowed smoothly; about as good as you ...
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Re: Shoes Strap Your Feet to the Earth
Knight Malachi here to review for Review Day and the YWS Default Background team. This story/poem was an interesting one as most are. I have to say that after this ...
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Re: When I Cry: Chpt. 2
Knight Malachi here to review on Review Day. So I think I liked this chapter better than chapter one in part because it seems shorter, and also because there is ...
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Re: When I Cry: Chpt. 1
Knight Malachi here to review for Review day, even though you are on the opposite team. I did this review partly for the blue team, and partly because I never ...
Sep 29, 2013 - Re: When I Cry: Chpt. 1 Sep 29, 2013
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Re: Elementary to High school
Knight Malachi here to review for team blue on Review Day. This is a very good poem with a good moral behind it, and I enjoyed reading it. But your ...
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Re: symbiosis
Knight Malachi here to review for you for Review Day. Go YWS Default Background!! So, this is a somewhat funny poem. i loved the lines: "Please don’t lay eggs under ...
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Re: The Candle.
Knight Malachi here to review for team blue on Review Day. So this was a very emotional, but very well done story. I could really envision everything because you used ...
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Re: No. 3, Noel
Knight Malachi here to review for Review Day, team blue! So, I didn't know this was part of a story, I just thought it to be a short story, but ...
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Re: operation imperial [prologue]
Knight Malachi here to review for Review Day. I'd seen your operation Imperial chapters being posted for quite some time, and finally thought I'd see what it was. So here ...
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Re: The Snowman
Knight Malachi here to review for team blue, on Review Day. This was a creative and a fun thing to write about I'm sure. I love all of the random ...
Sep 29, 2013