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Re: Clockwork
Knight Malachi here to review on Review Day!!!! so to be honest I don't all of what you are saying in this poem, but it was very very well written. ...
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Re: Once is Never Enough
Knight Malachi here to review as Review Day comes to a close in a nail-biter. This is exactly how I feel. I always have all these ideas, and think of ...
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Re: Falling For Science
Knight Malachi here to review.Boy is Review Day stressful! Whew! So that in a way a super-duper cool way to write this with all the different scientific stuff. Not something ...
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Re: Me (for lack of a better title)
Knight Malachi here to review on a hectic and very competitive Review Day> On top of it being my first one. Whew! First of all think this is a cool ...
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Re: Freedom
Knight Malachi here to review. So first of all there are typos galore, like all over the place. Examples: If you want something, g find someone Should be go, not ...
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Re: A writer's life
Knight Malachi here to Review my fellow team blue comrade, as we near the end of Review Day. What can I say ?That you hit it right on the head ...
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Re: Ostara
Knight Malachi here to review on this crazily awesome Review Day. So this poem is really pretty, and I really like how you described the natural beauty of everything. The ...
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Re: Ebony
Knight Malachi here to review on a busy busy Review Day. This poem was . . . wow that was sad. Very emotional and sadly very true of what used ...
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Re: A Cup Of Hedgehog
Knight Malachi here to review for Review Day, which is pretty hectic at the moment. So that is so cute!!!!!! I think that is awesome that you have your cute ...
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Re: Can You Grasp It In Your Hand?
Knight Malachi here to review on this grand and glorious, not to mention too-close-for-comfort Review Day. Stay ahead blue team!!!! You can feel the wind blow but, can you grasp ...
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Re: The Circle of Life (in the key of Em)
Knight Malachi here to review for Review Day. The forest winds its way from the wrist root to branches of fingers. There is mahogany in my knuckles, hammers that echo ...
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Re: Lords, Give Me Courage...
Knight Malachi here to review for Review Day. and one by one your backs have turned away. Now, I stand alone. At first I thought you should join the now ...
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Re: I Could Not Save You
Knight Malachi here to review for Review Day. gotta keep the blue team in the lead!!!! This is a good poem of how you can get lost in fame. And ...
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Re: Doom Making It's Way.
Knight Malachi here to review to keep blue team on this grand and glorious Review Day!!!!! First off the beginning makes it sounds like something disastrous is bound to happen, ...
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Re: Randomisty writing
Knight Malachi here to review both of these poems on Review Day. Go team blue!!!!!!! for Eternal: I really liked your rhyming. It flowed smoothly; about as good as you ...
Sep 29, 2013