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Knight Malachi here to review for the Knights of the Green Room. First off, welcome to YWS! I am sure you will love this site as much as I have., ...

Knight Malachi here to do a final review for the day, for the KotGR And a perfect one to top off the day. I have to say thank you for ...

Knight Malachi here to review for Knights of the Green Room. So the rhythm of this was pretty good except in a few parts. Here they are. 1. They say ...

Knight Malachi here to review for the Knights of the Green Room. So I couldn't find any punctuation or spelling errors in here ;) I have to say that as ...

Knight Malachi here to review for KotGR. So this is actually very true sometimes. I always feel like I'm looking for something deeper, and sometimes there is, but sometimes there ...

Knight Malachi here to review for the KotGR So number one thing I have to say is that when I saw every line rhymed my mouth went :OOOO I was ...

Knight Malachi here to Review for the Knights of the green Room. This is the only error I saw. It should be him instead of his. All of us look ...

Knight Malachi here to review for KotGR. So, I saw a few typos, but my apologies I can't re-find them. Anyway, I found one or two punctuation problems as well, ...

Knight Malachi here to review. I probably would've this sooner, had I not missed it in the green room. Now, onto the review. I agree with Griffin about your detail ...

Knight Malachi here to review for the Knights of the Green Room. First off I would like to say that I liked being able to understand what was going on, ...

Knight Malachi here to review So this poem was a cool poem. I really liked reading it. It seemed like a pretty light and fun poem at first, but as ...

Hi, I was going to review this, but when I saw how long it was I said uh-uh. This too long. Sorry, but I know of only 2 or 3 ...

Knight Malachi here to review for KotGR So I loved this poem. I liked what it was about, and how you completed the story. Going from what a princess usually ...

Knight Malachi here to review for KotGR So this poem was very well written, very well described and had a lot of metaphoric language in it which was good, but ...

Knight Malachi here to resume work for the Knights of the Green Room I noticed one little mistake right away. not a big one though. The period here should be ...