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Re: The Quiet Things That No One Ever Knows: Chapter 1.2
Hi there! Im back for more as promised. Let's meet our newest contestant. I think Wolfi did a really good job once again of pointing some things out. I figured ...
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Re: The Quiet Things That No One Ever Knows: Chapter 1.1
Im a suckered for murder and mystery, and sticking it out in the big sky country just makes it that much better! Let's get to it. Wolfi and Orion also ...
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Re: The Sins We Inherit - 1
Hi there! I saw mystery/suspense and there isnt a ton of that on here. Im always up for a mystery, so I thought id stop by as we work through ...
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Re: Our empty bed
Hi there! Welcome to YWS! Your title and description sounded interesting so I thought id check it out. Laying alone in her bed, she kept her eyes glued to the ...
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Re: Laughing Jack and Aeliana talk about friendship
I saw Laughing Jack so I come a running. Since i saw Aelina I figured this is either more backstory or a continuation of the magic show from last night, ...
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Re: Laughing Jack gives Aeliana a show!
I saw Laughing Jack so I thought id come by for more since ei was reading about him last night. Just a few quick thoughts tonight. I would have liked ...
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Re: Laughing Jack’s proxy pledge
Hi creepy, im back for another (and maybe one more since these are so short and sweet.....we'll, at least short) When the merry-go-round goes about and around Consider changing "about" ...
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Re: Carter’s poem
Hi creepy. Trooping on through the green room so I'm back once again for revmo and Team Tortoise It was the same thing every day, why bother to listen You ...
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Re: Found but Gone
Hi Icarus! This is my first time seeing your work. Happy Review Month and go all Team Tortoises. Down by the waterfall, a pair sat. This was a sight to ...
Sep 22, 2025 -
Re: Eternal Beauty | Chapter 16
I am back again and am so thoroughly out of ways to introduce myself so here we go and happy Saturday! His stomach growled in response to the scent of ...
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Re: Eternal Beauty | Chapter 15
Back for more! The observatory door creaked as Kei pushed it open, the sound echoing in the cavernous silence. Inside, the air was cool, carrying the faint metallic tang of ...
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Re: Eternal Beauty | Chapter 14
Yay, more chapters for revmo! Here we go I dont have any specifics for tonight. But I think this was one of my favorite chapters. The relationship between Kukui and ...
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Re: Nova’s angel
Back for one more review before I pass out! Penelope is a familiar name, but I cant recall at the time which story I read with her. “You…you did?” Ahahaha ...
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Re: ☠️🪦 Sebastian Shapcott 🪦☠️
Hi creepy. Have Revmo. I see more poetry, and I click. This a short one, so not a ton to say. The rhyming scheme is a bit all over the ...
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Re: Hills of Kest-Elin
Hi there! Happy revmo month. As a fellow fantasy writer and someone who dabbled in poetry this caught my eye. I cant believe it sunk into the green room for ...
Sep 17, 2025
