Messenger

The Messenger here to review for ya! So, I really like your idea here. It is a spooky idea, and leaving no explanation is fine. It adds to the suspense. ...

Messenger here to review for Ya! Well this was short. A lot shorter than most poems, but you know what? It was just as good. One thing I am really ...

Messenger here to review for ya! So, I felt that although ( as CamorynAnn said) I love the descriptive words, and that you were able to bring every emotion in ...

Hi. Messenger here to review for ya! First thing I noticed was that you kept on going in and out of past tense and present tense. It really makes things ...

Hi. Messenger here to review for ya! Only the sign remains, rotted away from years of abuse, cocked to one side crookedly. Out in the middle of what had been ...

Messenger here to review. Whooooooooooa! That was long and full of stuff. OK, so, you switch from past tense to present back and forth like crazy. Form the most part ...

Messenger here to review! So . . . uh . . . I read this, and then read it again, and I am not getting it. It was actually very ...

Hi! Messenger here to review for you today! so! Her crew, David grabbed the jib sheet and they pushed off from the dock. This line makes no sense. I'm not ...

Hiya, Messenger here to review for ya! So first off I LOVE Batman. Sadly I have barely read any of the comics he is in. But I love the Christopher ...

I am here to review for ya! BTW that picture is terrifying. Did he feel as if he, almost, owed the world for being so sickeningly arrogant Messed up wording ...

Well besides the fact hat I don't understand most of this, I will give you a short review. Well bloodlink covered just about every line. I'll try to be a ...

The Messenger here to review. So! Grammar, punctuation, all that stuff is in tip-top shape so I won't speak of that. The content is even better. They way in which ...

The Messenger here to review. So! “For how long?!” Not sure how I feel about the ?! part. I could already tell from the previous lines that Axel was angry, ...

The Messenger here to do a bit of reviewing. So! The beginning (I haven't read chapter 1, sorry) is very insightful. I feel like I am in the chase, even ...

Messenger here to review and it will be my second review of this crazy World Wide Review Day. So! So this "handled" really well. Or it flowed really well. The ...