Messenger

aaand now I see that this is part 2 of chapter 1, so you can kind of ignore that little bit I wrote about the ending feeling off. >.> Must've ...

Me iz gonna do dis story first, cuz it has less reviews. *ahem* *dashes in and slides on knees.* Messenger. Has. Arrived! *blares trumpets* HAPPY REVIEW DAY! *confetti goes everywhere* ...

Messenger here to review for you Green Light, because I am sick of bad drivers and I'm not even driving yet xDDD Bahjahahahaha that was so good. I mean that ...

Hey Mikko, Messenger here to just tell you some things real fast and then whiz away! This en-captures so many cool things at once. It reminds me of just sitting ...

Hi Pies, I am all caught up once this review is done!! YAY!! XD Anyway, elt's get right into the story! If you choose to brave the freezing blizzards of ...

Hey Pies, I'm on a roll! xDD Let's see what we have in this chapter, and find out exactly what a prakfura is, and why on earth someone is putting ...

Hi Pies! I saw that this was a pretty short chapter, so I think I have the time to review it for you! I saw you say something about fragment ...

Hey Pies, as you requested a few weeks ago and I began, I shall now march my way through your book. I must say that this length of chapter looks ...

Hi Wolf, I thought the title looked incredibly confrontational hee hee so I hopped on over. A great soldier can rise, defeat an even greater foe, and some how still ...

I thought I'd come back and give you a proper review Pomsies, so here I am! Iggy really dissected this really well. She grabbed a lot of good nitpicks, so ...

Messenger here since I was tagged and want my next blue star :P A wind of brutql force blows upon my body, Typo! Brutal is correct :) Rain slamming against ...

Hiya, it is your local Messenger for a brief review! just here for quick nitpicks! His calm features contorted into a frown. "So, it is," he said, "that you hate ...

I am back Noelle! Hahahaha I am now ahead of everyone *laughs evilly* and you said I needed to catch up :) Anyways, let's see if Ida has anything worth ...

Hi Noelle, I am finally back. Wow this chapter looks so short after reading Pies' chapter. xDDD Anyway, shall we hop into the review! We made her tea. Halfway through ...

Hey Pies, I am back as promised! So, shall we rip this things to shreds as I am completely incapable of doing? OK, good then, let's do it. :) “Aley! ...