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Re: Faded Memory Chapter Six
Hi Soulkana, I finally found this still in the Green Room! As a Knight of The Green Room, I hereby declare that I shall do all I can to get ...
May 12, 2014 -
Re: The Tales of the Argonauts: The Osorezu and the Hana (Chapter 1-1)
Hi! I completely forgot about this, I'm so sorry. But, alas I have finally made it. Please don't kill me :) So, shall we begin! Well, this felt really weird ...
May 9, 2014 -
Re: I wanted to be Cinderella.
Hi . . . I was planning on keeping my mouth shut about this one, but the last few lines snagged my eyes. I must wear these gender appropriate rags. ...
May 6, 2014 -
Re: The Long Weekend: Part 1.
Messenger is here, as you requested on my thread! So let's get to the review! :) plain prick houses that ran parallel along each side of the road. Prick? I ...
Apr 30, 2014 -
Re: The Stars in Her Eyes - Chapter 2 Part 2
Bee-do bee-do- bee-do . . . Hi, tis me! The kingdom was always quiet at night. And not just because everyone was asleep. The guards were always out in full ...
Apr 30, 2014 -
Re: The Stars in Her Eyes - Chapter 2 Part 1
Hi Noelle, I'm baaack! Wow did Birkhoff go through this with a fine comb! Cara’s mother thankfully didn’t ask many questions and let him stay for that amount of time. ...
Apr 30, 2014 -
Re: The Stars in Her Eyes - Chapter 1 Part 2
Hey Noelle, I'm back. I want my stars, and the start to this story seems interesting, so you can start adding me to the list of followers you have! Shall ...
Apr 30, 2014 -
Re: The Stars in Her Eyes - Chapter 1 Part 1
Hi Noelle, I thought I'd return the favor for all those reviews! Me iz catching up to you too Mwahahahaha!!! “Please,” Milo begged. “Please, Father.” Oh dear, what a nice ...
Apr 27, 2014 -
Re: The Robot Girl
Well I decided I'd check out another one of your poems, since four out of the last five have been extremely amazing! Happy Review Day! now to get into the ...
Apr 27, 2014 -
Re: Your lips.
Hi Retro, it's me again! I have too say that even before I read this, I'm looking forward to it The title gives just enough info to make me want ...
Apr 27, 2014 -
Re: Reality Time
Hi, Messenger here to review this for you on Review Day! Got Team Red!! So, shall we begin?!?! Wow this was . . . strange, although not necessarily in a ...
Apr 27, 2014 -
Re: Blossoming Love
He Tulip, your fellow robot fighter is here xDD Well this is a lovely little poem you have here. I never felt it to be clunky as the previous reviewer ...
Apr 27, 2014 -
Re: Missing: Hellhound, black, size of a horse, likes belly rubs (a "The Book Man" fanfiction)
Hieee! A HUUUUGE TBM fan (actually I just finished reading it today!) When they had had a lovely dinner, courtesy to Liza, no thanks to Conrad, who still looked out ...
Apr 27, 2014 -
Re: The Story of Jason Griffin ~ Snippets 1-6
Hey, mine name is Messenger. Welcome to YWS! This is extremely long, and I'd advise posting it in parts. I'll review the prologue part until the first asterisks! Oh, and ...
Apr 27, 2014 -
Re: All for one
Messenger to review for you on this gloriously exciting Review Day! Yet there is no we in this life I'd suggest putting 'we' in quotation marks.And also there are a ...
Apr 27, 2014
