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Hey Pies, I'm on a roll! xDD Let's see what we have in this chapter, and find out exactly what a prakfura is, and why on earth someone is putting ...

Hi Pies! I saw that this was a pretty short chapter, so I think I have the time to review it for you! I saw you say something about fragment ...

Hey Pies, as you requested a few weeks ago and I began, I shall now march my way through your book. I must say that this length of chapter looks ...

Hi Wolf, I thought the title looked incredibly confrontational hee hee so I hopped on over. A great soldier can rise, defeat an even greater foe, and some how still ...

I thought I'd come back and give you a proper review Pomsies, so here I am! Iggy really dissected this really well. She grabbed a lot of good nitpicks, so ...

Messenger here since I was tagged and want my next blue star :P A wind of brutql force blows upon my body, Typo! Brutal is correct :) Rain slamming against ...

Hiya, it is your local Messenger for a brief review! just here for quick nitpicks! His calm features contorted into a frown. "So, it is," he said, "that you hate ...

I am back Noelle! Hahahaha I am now ahead of everyone *laughs evilly* and you said I needed to catch up :) Anyways, let's see if Ida has anything worth ...

Hi Noelle, I am finally back. Wow this chapter looks so short after reading Pies' chapter. xDDD Anyway, shall we hop into the review! We made her tea. Halfway through ...

Hey Pies, I am back as promised! So, shall we rip this things to shreds as I am completely incapable of doing? OK, good then, let's do it. :) “Aley! ...

Hey Sunshine, I am here to review . . . and smile a lot. The most powerful of us could appear human Are you sure you mean "could"? Shouldn't it ...

Hey, I am going to just review the prologue tonight and get to the other chapters tomorrow because it is late here. Sorry for arriving so late. The stumble downhill ...

Hi, Messenger here to give you a review and scoot this puppy out of the Green! Oh, and I am claiming it as a Knight of The Green Room, which ...

Hey life, thought I'd make a few comments here. I think you stayed true to the questions., You didn't stray away from them. You didn't attack the questioneer, which is ...

Hey Monsters. I read this, and to be honest, I'm a little confused. I feel like you made some very good points, the fact that our president and the government ...