Messenger

I am back again OBVIOUSLY. I remember this chapter vaguely from before but im curious to see if James has changed a bit and how this affects the pacing. It ...

Verena didn’t remember her hat falling off or losing her shoes. She just knew James was falling, and she wasn’t there. eeeeeasily your best opening line. I think adding on ...

CHICKENS.....ASSEMBLE. BLAAAAAH So, right off rip we are just using "he". i can infer it's james as this is a dual pov but consider either mentioning his name, or added ...

She skimmed the rest of the summary below the headline. Since last night's debacle, it seemed that someone, It didn’t name who, had made a statement has been made that ...

Unspecified to just this chapter, but it seems that your chapters are all posted in opposite order. When I hit next, and at the botttom of the chapters, it keeps ...

back againnnn She passed the conversation to James. No need to write this bit when she just said his name in a questioning tone. It's always good to let the ...

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back againnnn She passed the conversation to James. No need to write this bit when she just said his name in a questioning tone. It's always good to let the ...

hello ooh. Just a couple more chapters and then we're into the Green Room. Go Chickens Go! He inhaled intending to let out a bored sigh. Instead, he stopped mid ...

She’d have to hide it somewhere else. The downside of having a cleaning maid, meant that true privacy was hard to come by okay but like.... A. surely dhe has ...

hiiii happy review day. go team chickenssss. I fogured this was as good of an excuse as any to actually catch up and boy do i have to do. then ...

okay, this looks like a new chapter for real this time! She leaned toward Kei, her voice dropping to a conspiratorial whisper. I really like the use of conspiratorial. It's ...

Hi there! I wasnt even going to write a review but a few things caught my eye that I'd like to point out. First off though, I love love love ...

Hi Dove! Back again to get all caught up. On a side note though... While ive read most of your chapters from the Green Room where I can easily access ...

Hi there! I was following this during the last review day and am here to continue on this psychological thriller. stared at her, unable to move, unable to look away ...

Im heeeeeeeere They’d appeared with their backs to a castle, standing outside the entryway, a towering structure build of yellowed stoned, towers and walls brough to extreme heights by the ...