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Re: Marcia’s origin: “Marcia Blythe’s dear love”
Hi creepy. You know the drill. Happy revmo This is a short piece so I don't have a ton to say, but I do have some. You use "who" twice ...
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Re: Mellowed by the sun
Hello hello and happy Review month. Is it as calming as the wake before the sun, or do you dig to find a new layer to call home? I like ...
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Re: 🕰️⚙️Factory’s end ⚙️🕰️
Yay I always love when you slap down some poetry. I think its an underrated part of your game. Shall we begin? Just a few sporadic thoughts. 1. Amelia Badelia ...
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Re: crows about surfing cow
Hi happy Review Day. Or in crow can caaaw caawww caw caaaw I cant believe im going to say this, but i found a typo. Maybe you should jist stick ...
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Re: Letter Two. Ayla's POV
Hi there! Happy Review Day. It's a shame this has sat for so long because I like this piece. Let's hope in to a couple of thoughts. You aren't dead; ...
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Re: The Wandering Cyborg, part 1.
Hi, welcome and happy Review Day. Time to get this out of the Green Room with a review! I tend to just jot stuff down chronologically and give some overall ...
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Re: Jackson-Zombies of Mariesville
You already know. Its ya Boi here They also knew of the existence of demons, but that was all. They didn’t know any dark magic, anything about summoning demons. Their ...
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Re: Evelyn: Bone Boy
Guess who it is, back on a Review Day. This is becoming something of a tradition. Perhaps I should bring cake next time. Hmm. Okay! I think I remember reading ...
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Re: Babbling
Here I am with my woefully inadequate review xD The birds are coming Flocking and bending their necks To catch the fatal glimpse Of when the sun meets the horizon ...
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Re: It won’t work out
Hi vamps! Time to to viral and pick up a cold (one) while im at it. I liked the opening. Who is her? What is her? In typical horror fashion, ...
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Re: to my father, from his daughter
Hi Leya! I dont know if I've ever read any of your works before, but this one caught my eye, and after reading it I thought I had to share ...
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Re: The Basement
Hi, here for a quick review! Oof. I loved this. I actually reread it twice because the twist definitely caught me off guard. I have a few thoughts, so lets ...
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Re: Otherland - Chapter 1
Hello Quinn. I see you've only been here a few months, so let me welcome you to YWS! The way I review is to go chronologically through some specifics you've ...
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Re: Silent Moment In A Theater
Hi there :) I know you've been around about a month, but welcome to YWS! When I review, I tend to just go in a chronological order and leave a ...
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Re: 25 classy Christmas tales (part three) (14-25)
Okay! Let's do this. One. Last. Time. For now at least, haha PART 14 Hey, my old friend Paolo. But this seems like a backstory, so I'm going to guess ...
May 31, 2025
