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  • Short Story » Fantasy, Supernatural Re: Marcia’s origin: “Marcia Blythe’s dear love”

    Hi creepy. You know the drill. Happy revmo This is a short piece so I don't have a ton to say, but I do have some. You use "who" twice ...

    Sep 3, 2025
  • Other » Spiritual, Other Re: Mellowed by the sun

    Hello hello and happy Review month. Is it as calming as the wake before the sun, or do you dig to find a new layer to call home? I like ...

    Sep 2, 2025
  • Lyrics » Fantasy, Supernatural Re: 🕰️⚙️Factory’s end ⚙️🕰️

    Yay I always love when you slap down some poetry. I think its an underrated part of your game. Shall we begin? Just a few sporadic thoughts. 1. Amelia Badelia ...

    Aug 30, 2025
  • Article / Essay » Humor, General Re: crows about surfing cow

    Hi happy Review Day. Or in crow can caaaw caawww caw caaaw I cant believe im going to say this, but i found a typo. Maybe you should jist stick ...

    Aug 30, 2025
  • Novel / Chapter » Narrative, General Re: Letter Two. Ayla's POV

    Hi there! Happy Review Day. It's a shame this has sat for so long because I like this piece. Let's hope in to a couple of thoughts. You aren't dead; ...

    Aug 30, 2025
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Science Fiction Re: The Wandering Cyborg, part 1.

    Hi, welcome and happy Review Day. Time to get this out of the Green Room with a review! I tend to just jot stuff down chronologically and give some overall ...

    Aug 30, 2025
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Supernatural Re: Jackson-Zombies of Mariesville

    You already know. Its ya Boi here They also knew of the existence of demons, but that was all. They didn’t know any dark magic, anything about summoning demons. Their ...

    Aug 30, 2025
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Supernatural Re: Evelyn: Bone Boy

    Guess who it is, back on a Review Day. This is becoming something of a tradition. Perhaps I should bring cake next time. Hmm. Okay! I think I remember reading ...

    Aug 30, 2025
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Babbling

    Here I am with my woefully inadequate review xD The birds are coming Flocking and bending their necks To catch the fatal glimpse Of when the sun meets the horizon ...

    Jun 25, 2025
  • Short Story » Fanfiction, Supernatural Re: It won’t work out

    Hi vamps! Time to to viral and pick up a cold (one) while im at it. I liked the opening. Who is her? What is her? In typical horror fashion, ...

    Jun 21, 2025
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: to my father, from his daughter

    Hi Leya! I dont know if I've ever read any of your works before, but this one caught my eye, and after reading it I thought I had to share ...

    Jun 16, 2025
  • Short Story » Horror, Fantasy Re: The Basement

    Hi, here for a quick review! Oof. I loved this. I actually reread it twice because the twist definitely caught me off guard. I have a few thoughts, so lets ...

    Jun 4, 2025
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Mystery / Suspense Re: Otherland - Chapter 1

    Hello Quinn. I see you've only been here a few months, so let me welcome you to YWS! The way I review is to go chronologically through some specifics you've ...

    Jun 3, 2025
  • Short Story » Theatre, Teen Fiction Re: Silent Moment In A Theater

    Hi there :) I know you've been around about a month, but welcome to YWS! When I review, I tend to just go in a chronological order and leave a ...

    Jun 3, 2025
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Supernatural Re: 25 classy Christmas tales (part three) (14-25)

    Okay! Let's do this. One. Last. Time. For now at least, haha PART 14 Hey, my old friend Paolo. But this seems like a backstory, so I'm going to guess ...

    May 31, 2025


That's just what translation is, I think. That's all speaking is. Listening to the other and trying to see past your own biases to glimpse what they're trying to say. Showing yourself to the world, and hoping someone else understands.
— Ramy (Babel by R. F. Kuang)