Merry_Haven

miyaviloves- When I first saw the title, I immediately had to check this out. Oh, and plus, I'm huge for historical fiction. Either it has romance or not. I still ...

KJ- Whoa. That did not just happen. Oh my god! That did just happen. Man, this story is getting intense and intenser every moment. I just love it. I have ...

KJ- Oh. Oh. Oh!! I'm really lovin' Vick's character. Now the situation from New York, is that somewhat in the present too? -- Okay, don't listen to me. I might ...

KJ- Wow another amazing chapter! I knew that the football scene would pop up. You know, I never knew that Becca had a brother. James. Okay, there's something going on ...

KJ- Uh. What happened to the football game? Or has that haven't happened yet? “I’ll never let you go, Rebecca Chapman.” I love how you incorporate these small sentences of ...

KJ- First off, Congrats Becca!! It's so cool that she got the scholarship. Yeah, I agree with everyone else, here. If Sheldon was looking/glancing at Ann she wouldn't be calling ...

KJ- Whoa. This almost gave me a fright when the door ranged. You think it was him but it wasn't just a boy, instead. I was wondering why you used ...

KJ- Oh. Oh. Oh!! I just love this story. I didn't get to say this in the other chapters, because I forgot, but you do an excellent way of going ...

KJ- Man, she does have a hard time at school. Especially with those two girls and those Gothic girls. Ouch. Now, there's something about Vick that wants me to know ...

KJ- Whoa, I think I can totally guess what's going to happen. But I like to see if my guess is wrong. Again, like I said in the first chapter...excellent! ...

KJ- Intriguing. Eye Catching. And just wonderful. This first chapter has grabbed me in and makes me want to read the next part. The emotions flow throughout the story, descriptions ...

Demeter- Is this the end? I think not. :? Are you still thinking of continuing? 'Cause you just left out with a cliff-hanger. Anyway, my thoughts... The characters seem kind ...

Demeter- Haha! :lol: I seriously laughed about the part with the three noses and mad scientist thing. Now that was funny. You know, I haven't heard the word, spooky in ...

Demeter- Zebra Crossing. I would have never thought. Nice. :) Misty freaking out was kind of scary, and what's with Milton? I do like to see where you're going with ...

Demeter- So what's with Satin? Why's she like this very emotional person who can't make up her mind? I feel like Jubiley and Misty have the same characteristics. Try to ...