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Re: maroon
Thank you for your review! Happy holidays~
Dec 24, 2016 -
Re: Memorabilia
Thank you for your review! I prefer to not capitalize anything in my less formal poems since it gives off a calm effect. If I'm not mistaken, it is okay ...
Sep 25, 2016 -
Re: Acacia
Thanks! YES FINALLY SOMEBODY REVIEWED THIS POEM! AND IT HAS CRITICSMS! I knew there were so many things wrong with it, because we were given limitations, like we only had ...
Aug 30, 2016 -
Re: Acacia
Thank you for your wonderful review! I was so happy when I found out somebody reviewed this. I'd been waiting for many days! :D
Aug 28, 2016 -
Re: You And The World That Holds You
Thank you for your review!
Aug 3, 2016 -
Re: paper words
THANK YOU FOR YOUR REVIEW! The inconsistency was something I didn't think about, and I have this habit of writing inconsistently, so it was awesome that you pointed it out. ...
Jul 15, 2016 -
Re: paper words
The inconsistency was probably there because I have this habit of writing inconsistently, despite people telling me not to. I'll check up on that. THANKS FOR YOUR REVIEW,
Jul 15, 2016 -
Re: You And The World That Holds You
Thank you for your review! Honestly, I am quite shocked that it turned out well, because most of my friends whom I showed this to, couldn't understand it. I feared ...
Jul 2, 2016 -
Re: You And The World That Holds You
Thank you for your review! I understand what you were trying to say. I guess I should try being more optimistic? :D Thanks again for your awesome review!
Jul 2, 2016 -
Re: steel rods
Thanks for your review!
Jun 26, 2016 -
Re: The Origins of the Modern Metro Manila
It also includes satire, although someone who doesn't know the Philippines very much will not probably relate.
Jun 25, 2016 -
Re: The Origins of the Modern Metro Manila
This flashfic is actually voicing out a somewhat bitter truth, in my stupid perspective. Don't worry awtbeyders. I got you bruh. Or not. I'm a crappy reader.
Jun 25, 2016 -
Re: steel rods
ooooooo edgelord topic. I like that phrase. *^* welp, thank you for liking this poem, though it is of edgelord essence.
Jun 18, 2016 -
Re: steel rods
Thank you for your review! I guess I just do things unconsciously. I didn't even realize how deliberate the line breaks were in the first stanza. Which makes them not ...
Jun 18, 2016 -
Re: I am you
Thank you for explaining this poem. I agree that this poem could have been more clear if you rephrase some things. Also, in the end, it doesn't seem like the ...
May 28, 2016
