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Hello, Horisun! Your brother's short-story was disturbing. I LOVED it! I hope you'll let him know that. I'm curious. Is he the one who had this nightmare or is it ...

Great writing :D The descriptions were cool. I liked the narration. It's a sad little tale. The beginning makes it clear that the ending is not going to be a ...

Hello, Junel! Nice name you got there! The story really intrigued me as I read. Great way to start. There were some silly grammartical errors through the whole thing though. ...

Hi there, It was incredibly realistic. I really loved the way you presented how a person suffering from depression really feels, what he or she has to go through, what ...

Hi Kat! Welcome to YWS! You have done a good job. This was a very good topic to write a poetry on! -You have got a great sense of rhythm! ...

Hello BookOholoc22! Well, a great poetry! But I would have liked to have a bit more rhythm in it! And my views on 'Forever'? Okay! Well really? I am not ...

Hi Abdullah! Great to meet you! -It was a pretty nice poem. There were a few things you might want to think about. I think you forgot to put commas ...

Hi, No idea what to say! Honestly! And I am not really getting a clear sense either you love shopping or not (you probably do like).. um.. you know, never ...

Hi xJupiter! Nice idea for this poetry! 1."becomes something catastrophic, in the blink of an eye" Is it you who becomes catastrophic or is it the world, it's confusing. 2."she ...

Hi Stranger! There's a feeling of loneliness in the poem and really everyone has these type of moments when you are willingly lonely.. So yeah really true and REALISTIC!! Well ...

Hi Haven! I am a freelance songwriter and singer! And its just perfect! The lyrics wonderful! And with some work done it can be a pretty good song. You should ...

Hi lau!! You are doing great with the storyline! Well as Steampowered said their were some spelling errors. Unlike chapter one in some paragraph you tried express a lot of ...