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Hey, BlackhawkUnder. It's Meerkat, reviewing as requested. I read the previous chapters, so I'm all caught up. As far as grammar and spelling go, this chapter was pretty error-free. I ...

Hiya, Skins. Just Meerkat here to give this chapter a much-deserved review. As far as grammar and spelling go, there's not much to fix. I just had a couple notes: ...

Hello Glauke, it's Meerkat reviewing as requested. I don't have a lot of experience reviewing poetry, but I hope I can be helpful nonetheless. Regarding grammar, spelling, word choice, and ...

Hiya, Audy! Meerkat reviewing as requested. Some notes on grammar, spelling, word choice, etc. (I like to get them out of the way first): -"A canyon runner can break a ...

Greetings, BlueJayWalker. We meet once more. Grammar, spelling, word choice, etcetera: -"...the right to anymore." The most proper form to say this is "any more," with two words. should in ...

Hey, BlueJayWalker, it's me again. Chapter three review coming up! Grammar, spelling, word choice, etcetera: -"...White Lion Guard's coat of arms ran forth. The White Lion Squad..." Which is the ...

Hey, BlueJayWalker10. It's Meerkat here for chapter two, as per your request. Some edits for specific phrases and such: -"He had pure gold irises." I get that this is fantasy, ...

Hello, BlueJayWalker10. Cool name, by the way. I'm Meerkat here to review as requested. I usually begin with edits regarding language mistakes and typos, so here goes: -"It may not ...

Hello, NerdyGirl. It's Meerkat, reviewing as requested. I believe the most pertinent question for this story is "What is its purpose?" Is there a specific goal for your assignment, such ...

Hey, zsmith, it's Meerkat reviewing as requested. Chapters One and Two already had several reviews, so I decided to start here. I read them both so I'd be caught up, ...

Hey there, I'm Meerkat. I was browsing the Green Room and came across your story. It was quite the serendipitous discovery, and I read the first chapter already so I'd ...

Hey, CodyKnight! I'm glad to see you've written another chapter. Let's get reviewing, shall we? Spelling/grammar/word choice: -"...seized his guts in its bladed grasp." A different adjective than "bla

Hello, CodyKnight! Welcome to YWS, and I hope you enjoy it here. This is a pretty great story to lead with for your first submission, I have to say. Now, ...

Hello, I'm Meerkat here with a review. One of the first things I noticed about this story is how well it flows. Some of the vocabulary words disrupted the tone, ...

Hiya, TopHatsUniversal. I'm Meerkat here with a review. Congrats on winning a competition, that's quite an accomplishment! You certainly develop a feeling of tension and an eerie atmosphere in the ...