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Hey Thien! I'm back with another critique for this other poem. *cracks knuckles* Let's get started. 1st stanza: You ought to elaborate, on the kind of phobia that we'd feel ...

Hey there, Thien(To the power of 3! :D) First off, I'd like to say that your tolerance is commendable, Especially when you were under not-so-nice fire by unhappy people. Everyone, ...

I live in a small Comma here shitty apartment. It gets so cold in the winter that I avoid showering for fear that my testicles might freeze to the side ...

Yup, you should work on this rough draft more before posting. You should work on: Your spelling, punctuation, grammar, the usual. You paragraphing is also poor. Every paragraph is only ...

This rap song is about my biography No ain't those show offs that film in pornography

Nightgown clinging to her body she raced through the sparse trees towards the intersection. Just a big closer she thought. Just a bit closer and I will see her. Gilded ...

Ashleylee! *huggles* I was so consumed by my beating heart that I didn’t hear him approach until it was too late. Nate hit me with a powerful blow to the ...

Whoa. That was cool. I'm not a poet so I only comment on grammar and stuff for this forum. Looks like the mistakes pointed out have already been edited by ...

The solar winds caused by the explosions lashed out into the emptiness of space, as if searching for something to obliterate to soothe the star's fiery heart. /quote] To obliterate ...

What's up Nut? Meep is here to critique! :D Let's get down to the icky part first. Get it over with XD Somewhere, in the back of my mind, I ...

Hey there, mikepyro! Well, this script is certainly more amusing than funny to read. But it had good entertainment value. It definitely kept my attention throughout the piece. You should ...

Short, somewhat amusing, but very disturbing. As springrain has pointed out, remember the 2:1 rule. As well as how to appropriately rate your works. This should get an 'R' rating ...

Ah, Mister Ned Kelly. The fascinating hero/villain. Hiya there, Penguin! :D Firstly, I'd like to point out that I liked the dialogue :D Very interesting...and funny (don't ask me why) ...

Hey KJ! Another brilliant chapter done by you! *standing ovation!!!* Honestly, if this book ever gets published, Send me a copy, Even though I live all the way in Singapore ...

Gosh, thanks for making me smile! I get a tad annoyed when my friends complain that they're fat, When they're already resembling toothpicks, While I'm the one standing there with ...