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Hey Ross, I'll do a quick one before I go off to watch football. I didn't expect your piece to be so short! I would've liked more development on the ...

Hey tommyknocker! I'm here to give you a brief review. As mentioned by others, capitalising the 'i's is a simple task you should accomplish before you post a story. There ...

Holy guacamole, iceprincess! This was a refreshing and great read! You've a unique way of describing things, and it's good that you've conveyed much of the emotions through actions rather ...

Hi! It's late here, so I'll have to be brief! The one thing I liked about your short piece is that amongst the somewhat cliched/melodramatic bits that come with young ...

I did a review for this piece but it seems to have vanished into thin air D: I'll just briefly do another one! I liked the concept of using third ...

AWW. That was my overall feeling from reading this. (It's a good feeling!) You've allowed readers to empathise with the MC, which is good. I got a little lost with ...

Whee! Does this mean my muffin of inspiration worked? xD Hey Isha, Meep(: here to give my $0.02 :D I did a quick read and just this one error made ...

This belongs in a blog or something, but I wouldn't consider it a proper literary piece. Unless you're writing a scene where people are chatting online, emoticons shouldn't be used. ...

- How does it look in your browser? It looks fine! One thing though, I need to scroll left and right because the page width is slightly big. Maybe it's ...

Hi Dylan, I'm here to do a brief review. 1) The part where he abruptly has a change of heart about moving, is unrealistic. Try to make the decision-changing more ...

Hey Nike! Once again, you've created a piece with great description of emotions! Great job! :D I understand that you're making this into a novel, I'd suggest that you reveal ...

Hi there! It's late here, so I'll be brief! 1) It's spelt as 'fiance' :) 2) Your story/scene is not too shabby! However, for such 'drama', a lengthier piece would ...

Hi there! It's late here, so I'll be very brief! Your descriptions and the conveying of emotions are great, so keep up the good work! The only advice I can ...

Hi Kevin! I'm here to hopefully help :D My husband lay on the bed, tightly I don't think this is a correct expression sleeping in the quiet night of November. ...

Hi there, I will be correcting mostly your spelling today. Please make proper effort to edit and check your work before you post them, because there are some very amateur ...