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*le gasp* You have insulted Harry Potter thoroughly! The whole thing just freaked me out. But they ending made me laugh :D I thought Neville liked Luna... Ah well. Hermoine ...

AHahaha, give me clue here, Who is the POV belonging to? A bird? Peculiar story. But had an interestingly enigmatic quality that I can't explain. To be honest, it was ...

Hey Anssi (Can I call ya that?), I was wondering how many chapters of your story, did I miss. Turns out I didn't really miss anything at all XD Anyhoo, ...

*laughs* Y'know, I used to be quite (fine, VERY) obsessedwith the series, Until (thank heavens) some YWS members drove some sense into me. Right now, I'm just sitting on the ...

* critics are allowed. i want my works to be better and be the best it can be. and of course.. compliments are much appriciated. Ahahaha, technically, you can't really ...

Hey Jared! I'm short on time, so I'm afraid there will be no critique from me. Though I did carefully look through the story, And I must say I am ...

This story has potential. However, things you need to improve on: 1) I know same-gender romances aren't as common as boy meets girl type of stories, But within your category, ...

Well, I'm surprised that no one has pointed it out yet, But you rated your work in correctly. It shouldn't be PG-13, but R instead. Using the F-word even once ...

Hi there, SheepMonoxide! (Love your username, by the way) I shall be your critique of the day :D Let's get started with the nitpicks first. Well, the story begins in ...

Hey *writewatiwant*! I'm here to return the favour, for all your reviews :D I shall skip the nitpicking, as the mistakes I could find have already been pointed out. Interesting. ...

[quote="writ3rindisguis3]Today was September thirteenth, or in other words, my birthday. This would be my fifth years as a vampire.[/quote] Fifth year, singular form. Not years. I was away from my ...

Y'know, I'm not a big poetry fan, But many of the poems on YWS are amazingly unique and fantastic. Your poem here, is a prime example. All the quirky poets ...

~Well, I've decided to stay up late just to comment on this. At this moment, I: 1) Want to slap Becca senseless and comfort her at the same time. 2) ...

Winter's Twelfth Night, ~EPIC WIN~ (again!) So I assume there's a probability of an Eclipse & Twilight Parody? Please PM me if there is! :D You know... I've been thinking. ...

I hate the way you act around me I hate the way that you never hold me What do I like about you? I hate the way your shirt smells ...