MeadowLark

Heya there! This is an interesting story so far. I like the fact that you have a character with CIPA. It makes the whole thing far more fascinating :D I ...

Heya there! Welcome to YWS! Don't get scared if my review is a little harsh. I try not to be mean ;) Grumbling, he picked a lantern and walked over ...

Heya there! Yellow, orange and red leaves crunched under his boots as he dashed boots as he dashed past towering maples, cherries, and ash. Nix the bolded part. It had ...

Heya there Elendur! Welcome to YWS. I'll be reviewing this for you. Just a note, this isn't the begining What I don’t understand is why you wouldn’t post the beginning. ...

Heya there Sugar Snow! The Moon displayed the mysticism of its gentle, silvery rays. Is there some signifigance to why moon is capittilized? The people were bewitched by the sight. ...

Heya there! Me again. I must say, this is a wonderful second draft! Really. But still, I have a few nitpicks. I had a broken bones, stitches in four different ...

The Bronze Bow I don't know who the author is but I did not like that book. I thought it was very boring and kinda dumb. I also read a ...

I love the Inkheart Trilogy! They have got to be some of my favourite books to read. Cornelia Funke is a wonderful author. A girl in school recommened the book ...

Heya Doodle! Let's see what I can dig up, shall we? A waxy globe hung high in the dark sky that was speckled with little white dots, peeking out from ...

Heya Worx! Really, I couldn't find anything wrong so I think I'll comment on a few things. The first draft--though it was good--was nothing compared to this. This is a ...

Heya Saph! Sorry it took so long. Been busy. Ahem, now onto the review! This is the third in a series and I hope that it's better than the first ...

Heya there Lily! Just want to say, excellent story. I love it already. Ahem, now that the praise is done, to the review--I bet you're shaking with excitement. “When you ...

Heya there! First off, I just want to say I really enjoyed this piece. I don't know what Disney movie you were talking about so it's all new to me ...

Heya there! The birds chirped wildly in the tree tops, animals running around. I don't like this sentence. There. I said it. Animals will not run around if there are ...

Hey there Aryel! I'm here to review this. I'm going to point out a few important things: 1) This whole thing could be split up into seperate paragraphs so it ...