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Hmm, yeah, it's complicated because she knows she's in the rebel base, but she doesn't know where that base is. I probably should mention that. Thanks for the review!

If you had read the previous part, nearly all your questions would be answered. I might have Verona grill the doctor more, though. Thanks for the review!

Your right in that the escape should be more exciting, but this isn't the prison where she's supposed to spend 20 years. That's what she was going to get transferred ...

I keep seeing this in the Green Room and wanting to review it, but then I remember I already have...:P

Consider me reassured. :) And yeah, minor swear words are fine, and it really is used appropriately. And re: to the house size, that makes sense. My idea of "big" ...

Thank you so much for the review! You're right, of course - at this point I was trying to figure out what her emotions were and how to make her ...

but I have a feeling that more recently in your writing process you decided to incorporate some of Analia's thoughts Psh, yeah, in the last couple of weeks I've developed ...

Thank you for the review!

Because presumably whoever went to all the trouble of making a fake angel took that into account. XD

Thank you! This is really useful feedback.

Haha, yeah, formatting can be a pain. And I'm sorry if I gave you the impression that I didn't like it, since that wasn't what I was intending at all. ...

Hahaha, it's really not a big deal. That's what editing is for, right? XD

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Okay, so I guess that makes sense - it's a different regeneration of the Doctor, one that we haven't seen before. But canonically, Clara's only been with 11 and 12. ...

I'm glad I could help! I know the feeling of showing your works to a peer and them not helping at all. ;)