Mea

Thank you! All these little prose things are very helpful. I know it ended abruptly - I was planning on having the entire next scene be part of this one, ...

Thank you for the review. I'll look into some of your points. About the signatures thing, keep in mind that she is in an entirely different dimension and is already ...

Good, I'm glad it was helpful. :)

Yes, I am. It's my LMS story, so I've got to write something for it every week. In fact, I should have another chapter posted either today or tomorrow.

Thank you for all the reviews! I'm really glad you're enjoying this story. :D

This is a futuristic society, but it is not Earth. They have a different dating system. Right now, they're measuring from the year Shaping and teleporting were discovered. When that ...

Thanks for all the reviews! Trust me, they're received with open arms. And yeah, I am referring to the Arbitrators when I say "Absolutes." I keep changing their name, so ...

Thank you for the review!

This is the best one. XD

Thanks for the review! About the channel of communication, it would have opened the moment Verona stepped outside the police building and out of the Blocking field, but then once ...

Yes, I did reuse the beginning portion, which is why parts of it didn't quite fit with the rest of it. Blame rushed editing! I'll get all that worked out. ...

:D You sound just like me when it comes to composing.

This isn't going to be a review, but I just thought I'd mention something I thought about this. If it weren't for the "and," I'd find this a rather boring, ...

That's a shame about the formatting. :/ YWS is annoying sometimes. And that makes sense now, about why the villagers are happy. You might want to mention the fires somewhere, ...

Good, I'm glad. :D