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Thank you! And yeah, I have a ton of continuity errors in this as I just decide to change things, so that's probably why you're confused. xD

Thank you! And yeah, I have a ton of continuity errors in this as I just decide to change things, so that's probably why you're confused. xD

No problem, I'm glad it was helpful. :)

I think we're about halfway through - things are going to start moving at a faster pace soon. :D

That's good to hear - I hope it goes well.

It's not a problem - I was being more defensive than I should have been too. :)

Also, I think one reason you're not getting more views is because you're not specifying which fandoms in the title.

Ah, that makes sense - I've done that before. I was just using Harry Potter as a general example, though - I don't really think it's similar to what you ...

I have read your previous chapters - I even reviewed one of them. I'm sorry if I came off as harsh - this just provoked a bit of a strong ...

Oh, and thanks for explaining about the nosebleed thing - that makes more sense now.

Yes, I do realize that, but the way this was written does not in any way make me engage with the characters because of the stilted dialogue and...strange...actions, and the ...

No problem! And thanks for the clarification, that makes a lot of sense. :D

Yeah, I'm working on the back of the Green Room. :D And actually, I went and read a few other chapters after this, and I really like it. I have ...

No problem! I'm glad it was helpful, and I totally understand about first drafts being word vomit. Good luck!

Ah, that makes more sense. Thanks for the explanation!