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Thanks for the review! :D

Thanks for the review! The disconnect with 'turning' is the result of this being the last poem in a set of poems I was writing at the time - 'turning' ...

Thank you! I'll be sure to update you. (Sorry for late reply.)

Thanks for the review! I'm glad I made you think and that you found meaning in it. It's fairly close to what I was thinking, but it's always interesting to ...

Sorry for the sort-of late reply! I like your interpretations of it - poems can be interpreted however you want. This was based off a painting, so a lot of ...

Thank you, this is just what I needed! I wrote this for the June Contest, hence the paint imagery.

Thank you for the review! I'm glad you liked it. As for "I will to move" - I meant like I wish it to move, I'm trying to make it ...

Hey, thanks for the review! Just to let you know, I'm no longer working on this novel. I need a nice long break from it until I figure out all ...

No, I was thinking of what the spells they cast before they went in looked like. :D

Oh, and I totally forgot until just now (I'm such a bad mod sometimes xD) but I've bumped your rating up to 16 because of the swearing. ;)

I don't know about the omniscient thing - I keep going back and forth on it because I just haven't read all that many omniscient viewpoint books. To be honest, ...

Fair enough about the present tense - I've actually had a story do that to me. I wrote the whole thing in past tense and then it insisted it would ...

No problem, I'm glad it was helpful. :)