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Re: Did You Miss Me?
Hey! I'm here to rescue this from the Green Room for you! This might end up being a fairly short review, since this poem is just that great, and it ...
Aug 18, 2015 -
Re: We Act as if Everything is Fine and Smooth
Hey there! Thanks for requesting a review in my review thread. :D Let's get straight to it, then. I am not a fan of political poems - in my opinion, ...
Aug 17, 2015 -
Re: The Damage (Ch. 1)
Hey there! I'm here for the Big Review. So, first off, I like the idea you've got going here. The pacing is pretty good, and you do a good job ...
Jul 30, 2015 -
Re: Yarn of the Cowboy
Hey there! I'm here for the Big Review. This is a bit of an older piece, but I thought I'd review it anyway. I really like this little short story. ...
Jul 30, 2015 -
Re: Marvin-Chapter 1
Hey there! I'm here for the Big Review. So yay! The Hitchhiker's Guide to the Galaxy fanfiction! I love Hitchhiker's Guide to the Galaxy (hereafter referred to as HGttG, 'cause ...
Jul 30, 2015 -
Re: Help.
Hey there! I'm here for Review Day. So, I think it's safe to say this is a pretty dark story. It's rather well-written, too. There are only a few things ...
Jul 26, 2015 -
Re: Harry's Godcousin
Hey there! I'm here for a review. Formatting The formatting as it is now is very difficult to read and breaks several grammar rules. You have many long, long paragraphs, ...
Jul 26, 2015 -
Re: Apparition: The Game - Ch. 1 (Rewrite)
Hey there! I'm here for the Big Review. ;D I've read your original version of this, and I have to say I like this version a lot better. It's a ...
Jul 24, 2015 -
Re: The single key
Hey there! I'm here for the Big Review. If this review makes no sense, please bear with me, as I am rather sleep-deprived at the moment. This poem speaks to ...
Jul 24, 2015 -
Re: strong
Hey there. I'm here for The Big Review. This is an interesting poem. I like what you tried to do with the alliteration. In this case, however, I think your ...
Jul 23, 2015 -
Re: Final Celebration
Hi there! I'm here for the Big Review. This is a cool short story. I like how, although you stayed true to what the poem said, you added enough other ...
Jul 14, 2015 -
Re: To A Certain Jester
Dang. This is awesome. So, if I'm not much mistaken, the jester refers to somebody who was the narrator's friend, but the narrator realized that he wasn't genuine, and so ...
Jul 14, 2015 -
Re: stitched
Hey there! I'm here to review you again for The Big Review. I have some mixed emotions about this poem. I absolutely love the start and the end, but for ...
Jul 13, 2015 -
Re: I Have A Headache
Hey there! I'm finally here for the Big Review. First off, I can really relate to this poem. I get really bad migraines sometimes, and when I do, I can't ...
Jul 10, 2015 -
Re: I wish he knew/I wish she knew
All right, I'm here to review for the Big Review. I know this is really old, but I couldn't find anything new of yours, and this caught my eye! This ...
Jul 8, 2015
