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Re: Norse Creation Narrative
Hey there! Thanks for requesting a review in my review thread. I'm not at all familiar with Norse mythology, so bear that in mind through the review. First off, I ...
Tue Aug 25, 2015 1:20 pm -
Re: Did You Miss Me?
Hey! I'm here to rescue this from the Green Room for you! This might end up being a fairly short review, since this poem is just that great, and it ...
Tue Aug 18, 2015 1:46 pm -
Re: We Act as if Everything is Fine and Smooth
Hey there! Thanks for requesting a review in my review thread. :D Let's get straight to it, then. I am not a fan of political poems - in my opinion, ...
Mon Aug 17, 2015 5:31 pm -
Re: The Damage (Ch. 1)
Hey there! I'm here for the Big Review. So, first off, I like the idea you've got going here. The pacing is pretty good, and you do a good job ...
Thu Jul 30, 2015 11:55 pm -
Re: Yarn of the Cowboy
Hey there! I'm here for the Big Review. This is a bit of an older piece, but I thought I'd review it anyway. I really like this little short story. ...
Thu Jul 30, 2015 7:33 pm -
Re: Marvin-Chapter 1
Hey there! I'm here for the Big Review. So yay! The Hitchhiker's Guide to the Galaxy fanfiction! I love Hitchhiker's Guide to the Galaxy (hereafter referred to as HGttG, 'cause ...
Thu Jul 30, 2015 12:47 am -
Re: Help.
Hey there! I'm here for Review Day. So, I think it's safe to say this is a pretty dark story. It's rather well-written, too. There are only a few things ...
Sun Jul 26, 2015 9:13 pm -
Re: Harry's Godcousin
Hey there! I'm here for a review. Formatting The formatting as it is now is very difficult to read and breaks several grammar rules. You have many long, long paragraphs, ...
Sun Jul 26, 2015 3:45 pm -
Re: Apparition: The Game - Ch. 1 (Rewrite)
Hey there! I'm here for the Big Review. ;D I've read your original version of this, and I have to say I like this version a lot better. It's a ...
Fri Jul 24, 2015 11:08 pm -
Re: The single key
Hey there! I'm here for the Big Review. If this review makes no sense, please bear with me, as I am rather sleep-deprived at the moment. This poem speaks to ...
Fri Jul 24, 2015 9:53 pm -
Re: strong
Hey there. I'm here for The Big Review. This is an interesting poem. I like what you tried to do with the alliteration. In this case, however, I think your ...
Thu Jul 23, 2015 8:40 pm -
Re: Final Celebration
Hi there! I'm here for the Big Review. This is a cool short story. I like how, although you stayed true to what the poem said, you added enough other ...
Tue Jul 14, 2015 1:47 pm -
Re: To A Certain Jester
Dang. This is awesome. So, if I'm not much mistaken, the jester refers to somebody who was the narrator's friend, but the narrator realized that he wasn't genuine, and so ...
Tue Jul 14, 2015 12:45 am -
Re: stitched
Hey there! I'm here to review you again for The Big Review. I have some mixed emotions about this poem. I absolutely love the start and the end, but for ...
Mon Jul 13, 2015 10:51 pm -
Re: I Have A Headache
Hey there! I'm finally here for the Big Review. First off, I can really relate to this poem. I get really bad migraines sometimes, and when I do, I can't ...
Fri Jul 10, 2015 5:52 pm
