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Hey there! I'm here to kick this out of the Green Room for you. So, I went back and read your first chapter before reading this, and I'm conflicted. I'm ...

Hey there! I'm here for a quick review. So, before I started reviewing this I did a quick read-through of the previous chapter so I'd know what's going on. The ...

Hey there! I'm here to leave a bit of a comment, framed as a wholly inadequate review. When I clicked on this piece and read the summary you have here, ...

Hey! I saw this lurking in the back of the Green Room and thought I'd come kick it out. Also, I miss you and you should come back. Now, I ...

Hey there! I'm here for a quick review on this. It seems like you have the start to an interesting story here - I like that the old lady is ...

Aaaaand it's Apollo! Yay! So I guess my fears were unfounded. Yay! Although I do find it interesting that Chiron had assumed she was a daughter of the Big Three. ...

Hey there! I'm back! So yay! More of the characters we know and love! I have to say, you're doing an excellent job of keeping them all in character, something ...

Hey there! I'm here to review this lovely piece! I'm actually really excited to have found this and definitely surprised it hasn't generated more feedback, since it's pretty engaging and ...

Hey there! I'm here for a quick review on this lovely review day. So, I'm not going to lie - this isn't really my cup of tea, mostly with regards ...

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Hey there! It's really unfortunate how long this has been sitting in the Green Room, and I'm here to try to help you out of it. There are several reasons ...

Hey there! I'm here for a review on this lovely Review Day. So, overall, I like some of the ideas you have going here. I particularly think the details about ...

*Squees* This is so awesome! *calms down sufficiently to give coherent feedback.* Seriously, though I don't know why this hasn't gotten more attention, because it's excellent. I know you've really ...

Hey! I'm back again. Finally caught up now! So, I think this is super-cool. I think that the illusion thing with Silver was pretty clever, and definitely better than either ...

I'm baaaack! *Jumps in with a big splash* Okay, so I like this chapter. I think you do info-dump a bit, but I'm not sure it could be avoided and ...