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Hey there! I'm here for a review on this. :D So, overall, this is great. I like the characters - they're funny and quirky. Your main character in particular has ...

Hey there! I'm back again! Let's get right to it. So, something I really liked about this chapter was the last line. Just by itself, in a single paragraph, it ...

Hey there! I'm back again. This part was better than the last because more things happened. I'm really glad we get to see how Mohit has affected you and your ...

Hey there! So I have to say, I've been following your posts and things about Mohit for ages now, and they make me smile every time I see them. You ...

Hey there! I'm back again, and before I get into the actual review, I have a few bits of "housekeeping" information to tell you. 1. On YWS, we don't censor ...

Hey there! Back again. So, I had a couple more problems with this part than the last part, again mostly with plausibility issues. Something I'd like to say first is ...

Hey there! I've pretty much decide to review the whole thing at this point, since it seems that nobody else is going to, and it's a pretty enjoyable story. Let's ...

Hey there! I'm back for another review. So I liked this part better. I think again that your dialogue is very good, and I think your characters here are a ...

Hey there! I'm here for a review on this. To be honest, I really like this. Sure, I'm not a huge fan of the language, but as far as character ...

Hey there! I'm here for a quick review on this. So, I like that you're going for humor with this. I love books like this that are funny and audacious ...

Hey there! I'm here for a quick review. So, I'm afraid I haven't read the previous parts, so bear with me on that and feel free to ignore my suggestions ...

Hey there. Here for a review on this. I kind of echo what other people have said - it kind of bothers me how skewed of an interpretation this is ...

Okay, I like this. This is honestly an excellent chapter. Your strengths here are your description and character. You are very good at describing the scene here, with enough description ...

Hey there! I'm here to kick this out of the Green Room for you. So, I went back and read your first chapter before reading this, and I'm conflicted. I'm ...