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Hey there! I'm back for the final part. (I must say, it's nice to see a finished story on here.) So, I enjoyed this part more than the others. I ...

Hey! I'm back. So, I realize now that this is more of a comedy story, and things generally make a lot more sense. I'm still going to point out the ...

Hey there! I'm here for a quick review on this. So, it seems like you have a good handle on things here, but there's always something to improve. For one ...

Hey there! I thought I'd drop by and review this to get it out of the Green Room. You seem to have a good idea here, and it seems to ...

And I'm back again! Okay, so first off just a bit of housekeeping - literary works aren't required to be rated on YWS unless they would be rated 18+, and ...

Hey there! I'm back. So, yeah, this is definitely third person omniscient, and I'm starting to warm to it now. Even though we aren't in the character's head, in this ...

Hey there! I'm here for a review on this. It turns out I actually reviewed the first part a while back, and seeing that some of these got stuck in ...

Hey there! I'm here for a review, so this gets out of the Green Room! So, I don't know what this is fanfiction of. It doesn't seem anything particularly fanfiction-esque. ...

Hey there! I'm here for a quick review. So, really this is quite good. I could quibble about the plausibility of him waking up from a coma, but I won't ...

Hey there! I'm here to banish this from the Green Room once and for all! So, the first tiny thing I have to say is that I don't really think ...

Hey there! I'm back for another review! This part was also well-written and engaging. While not a lot of "exciting" things happen, it was still engaging and interesting instead of ...

Hey there! I'm here for a quick review on this. Apologies for not having read previous parts. So, this is a good part, and I'm honestly not entirely sure if ...

Hey there! I'm here to rescue this work from the dastardly clutches of the Green Room. (yes, I am feeling melodramatic today.) So! You've clearly got a well-thought out and ...

Hey there! I'm here for a quick review on this. So, I like lots of what you have so far. Kora is compelling, and she has a clear arc - ...

Hey there! Let's get this out of the Green Room for you. So, I've never read the poem or heard of the author that inspired this, but I thought this ...