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Re: To Walk On A Tightrope
Hey there! I thought I'd give this a quick review today. This has a lot of potential. It's a pretty interesting story about a sleepwalker, although the ending is more ...
Fri Sep 16, 2016 12:16 pm -
Re: The Colour of a Streetlight (Part 1)
Hello there! I really enjoyed reading this, so I thought I'd go ahead and give it a review. Your strength here is the exposition, and I don't say that often. ...
Fri Sep 16, 2016 11:47 am -
Re: A Forgotten Family Trip
Hey tammy! I thought I'd drop by and review this today. Funnily enough, we've been studying travel writing in English class, so hopefully I can be of some help. The ...
Thu Sep 15, 2016 10:53 am -
Re: Stevie's Stories: Chapters 1 - 3
Hey there! I saw this was in the Green Room still, and I thought I'd come review it. First off, a small word of advice. The reason this hasn't gotten ...
Wed Sep 14, 2016 12:06 pm -
Re: The Last Light Companion [Chapter 4.3]
Let's get down to business! TO DEFEAT. THE HUNS! Okay, so I'm totally on board with all the character stuff going down here. I really like Rachelle - not as ...
Wed Sep 14, 2016 8:56 am -
Re: Blue Willow (unfinished)
Hey there! I saw this in the Green Room today and thought I'd drop by and review it. I really quite liked this story. It feels very self-contained, and I ...
Tue Sep 13, 2016 9:49 am -
Re: Air of freedom
Hey there - I read this and thought I'd go ahead and review it today. The biggest thing I noticed was that it was hard to tell what was actually ...
Tue Sep 13, 2016 8:19 am -
Re: Red-capped Girl [UNFINISHED]
Hi Lightsong! I know this is unfinished, but I thought I'd go ahead and review it anyway and just ignore that part. The biggest thing I noticed with this short ...
Mon Sep 12, 2016 10:15 pm -
Re: Buried Alive
Hey there! I thought I'd come along and review this for you today. I'm not amazing at reviewing lyrics, but I'll do my best. I like this, overall. Lyrics are ...
Mon Sep 12, 2016 2:18 am -
Re: War of Dawn - Chapter 24
Back again, as always. :) I don't have too much to say. I'm really glad that we're finally figuring out what's going on with Paula and that she's letting Hilda ...
Mon Sep 12, 2016 12:05 am -
Re: The Beging of the final chapter of Satan's Children
Hey there! I thought I'd drop by and review this for RevMo. I know you've asked for suggestions as for how to keep going with this and end it, which ...
Sun Sep 11, 2016 11:53 pm -
Re: Unlucky Catkill Court (part 1.06)
Back again! And yay, fully caught up now. So! I think my biggest criticism here is that this ends too soon. The ending is supposed to be kind of a ...
Sun Sep 11, 2016 9:53 am -
Re: Unlucky Catkill Court (part 1.05)
Back again. :) Another good part. I like that we're being introduced to Quinton's mom so early in the book, instead of her being a largely faceless antagonist. However, I ...
Sun Sep 11, 2016 9:25 am -
Re: Unlucky Catkill Court (part 1.04)
So, being the resident sort-of stalker of Chronicles, I thought I'd continue my stalking here, except actually starting at the beginning and reading all the parts this time. :P And ...
Sun Sep 11, 2016 8:50 am -
Re: War of Dawn - Chapter 23
Hey, Costa. Back again as always. So, all this information about what was going on back in her town and how she wound up in that situation is great to ...
Sat Sep 10, 2016 11:04 am
