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  • Other » Supernatural, General Re: To Walk On A Tightrope

    Hey there! I thought I'd give this a quick review today. This has a lot of potential. It's a pretty interesting story about a sleepwalker, although the ending is more ...

    Fri Sep 16, 2016 12:16 pm
  • Novel / Chapter » Realistic, Science Fiction Re: The Colour of a Streetlight (Part 1)

    Hello there! I really enjoyed reading this, so I thought I'd go ahead and give it a review. Your strength here is the exposition, and I don't say that often. ...

    Fri Sep 16, 2016 11:47 am
  • Other » General, General Re: A Forgotten Family Trip

    Hey tammy! I thought I'd drop by and review this today. Funnily enough, we've been studying travel writing in English class, so hopefully I can be of some help. The ...

    Thu Sep 15, 2016 10:53 am
  • Novel / Chapter » Dramatic, Realistic Re: Stevie's Stories: Chapters 1 - 3

    Hey there! I saw this was in the Green Room still, and I thought I'd come review it. First off, a small word of advice. The reason this hasn't gotten ...

    Wed Sep 14, 2016 12:06 pm
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Mystery / Suspense Re: The Last Light Companion [Chapter 4.3]

    Let's get down to business! TO DEFEAT. THE HUNS! Okay, so I'm totally on board with all the character stuff going down here. I really like Rachelle - not as ...

    Wed Sep 14, 2016 8:56 am
  • Short Story » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: Blue Willow (unfinished)

    Hey there! I saw this in the Green Room today and thought I'd drop by and review it. I really quite liked this story. It feels very self-contained, and I ...

    Tue Sep 13, 2016 9:49 am
  • Short Story » Mystery / Suspense, General Re: Air of freedom

    Hey there - I read this and thought I'd go ahead and review it today. The biggest thing I noticed was that it was hard to tell what was actually ...

    Tue Sep 13, 2016 8:19 am
  • Short Story » Realistic, Mystery / Suspense Re: Red-capped Girl [UNFINISHED]

    Hi Lightsong! I know this is unfinished, but I thought I'd go ahead and review it anyway and just ignore that part. The biggest thing I noticed with this short ...

    Mon Sep 12, 2016 10:15 pm
  • Lyrics » Lyrical, Romantic Re: Buried Alive

    Hey there! I thought I'd come along and review this for you today. I'm not amazing at reviewing lyrics, but I'll do my best. I like this, overall. Lyrics are ...

    Mon Sep 12, 2016 2:18 am
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: War of Dawn - Chapter 24

    Back again, as always. :) I don't have too much to say. I'm really glad that we're finally figuring out what's going on with Paula and that she's letting Hilda ...

    Mon Sep 12, 2016 12:05 am
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Supernatural Re: The Beging of the final chapter of Satan's Children

    Hey there! I thought I'd drop by and review this for RevMo. I know you've asked for suggestions as for how to keep going with this and end it, which ...

    Sun Sep 11, 2016 11:53 pm
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Mystery / Suspense Re: Unlucky Catkill Court (part 1.06)

    Back again! And yay, fully caught up now. So! I think my biggest criticism here is that this ends too soon. The ending is supposed to be kind of a ...

    Sun Sep 11, 2016 9:53 am
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Fantasy Re: Unlucky Catkill Court (part 1.05)

    Back again. :) Another good part. I like that we're being introduced to Quinton's mom so early in the book, instead of her being a largely faceless antagonist. However, I ...

    Sun Sep 11, 2016 9:25 am
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Fantasy Re: Unlucky Catkill Court (part 1.04)

    So, being the resident sort-of stalker of Chronicles, I thought I'd continue my stalking here, except actually starting at the beginning and reading all the parts this time. :P And ...

    Sun Sep 11, 2016 8:50 am
  • Article / Essay » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: War of Dawn - Chapter 23

    Hey, Costa. Back again as always. So, all this information about what was going on back in her town and how she wound up in that situation is great to ...

    Sat Sep 10, 2016 11:04 am


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