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I wasn't expecting these stories to have continuity! I like it a lot. It's cool when these things tie together. This is also pretty solid overall. I especially like how ...

Wow. This was great. I think this is a big improvement over your last story. The tone feels similar, but this is much easier to read and generally makes more ...

Hey there! I'm here for a the review you requested in my review thread. Thanks for the request, and sorry it took a couple of days to get around to. ...

...I don't quite know where to begin with this. It's oddly surreal. The vampires were about as random as I can imagine. The whole story feels bizarrely dream-like. I had ...

Ah, this is good. I rarely read a work this long on here so thoroughly, but this was a pleasure. I really hope we get some more answers soon. Biggest ...

Hey there! I'm here for a quick review today. Overall, I really liked the general plot, and I think it's interesting how you have a character on the investigative side ...

Hey there! Thought I'd come rescue this from the Green Room today. So. I want to talk about your POV. Specifically some of the logical things that have to happen ...

Hey there! I saw that this has been in the Green Room for far too long, so I thought I'd rescue it. Narrative poetry. That's something I don't see very ...

Hey there! Thought I'd drop by for a review today. So, I'm liking how your MC is sort of human and sort of not. Definitely interesting implications there, with how ...

Okay, so I really enjoyed this. Also DreamWalker's review was great and I hope I can expand on it a little. Also, I'm not familiar with the story this is ...

This has been sitting here for a month - let's get it out. So, lyrics. I don't pretend to be experienced with them, and of course it's hard to convey ...

*Dies laughing again* Okay, so yeah, I think it's good that you expanded this. It ends at a better place and gives us more time to get used to this ...

OKAY so that ending is adorable and I love it. But let's get to this - this review will encompass both the last chapter and this epilogue, basically the ending ...

OKAY. Let's get to this. So. I have some rambley thoughts about the ending as a whole that I will put in the epilogue, but I'll put my actually specific ...

Hey there! I thought I'd drop a quick review on this tonight. Something I'm really enjoying here is just your prose - the main character's voice is actually very smooth ...