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Hey, I'm back again! There was one big thing I didn't believe about this chapter, and that had to do with Devin's injury. I'm not an expert, but apparently gut ...

Okay, I'm really into this story. I read halfway through this and went back to read the first chapters for context, and I think I'm hooked. So, you do a ...

Hey there! I thought I'd go ahead and give this a quick review. I want to insult it. Badly. I just wanted to say this was great because it immediately ...

Hey there! I thought I'd drop by to review this. So this is a cool way to do a story, instant messaging back and forth. I think it works pretty ...

Hey there! I saw that this has been hanging out in the Green Room for a while and I thought I'd come review it. Also, I apologize in advance for ...

Hey there! I noticed this has been sitting in the Green Room for a while, and I thought I'd swing by to review this. So, the first thing I noticed ...

Hey, I'm back! So this is a nice kind of transistion chapter - it's great to get to see them all interact and just kind of have fun together. Shiraku ...

Hey StormCycle! I saw this hanging out in the Green Room and thought I'd come review it. Honestly, I don't know the exact requirements of the assignment, but I'd guess ...

Hey there! I thought I'd drop by with a review today. I went ahead and read your (edited) first chapter before reading this one. So, I like this already. You've ...

Hey there! I remember reviewing one of these before, so I thought I'd take a look at this one too. Honestly, I really liked this one. Adding the second person ...

Hey birk! I noticed the second part of this was sitting in the Green Room and thought I'd come give it a review. (I did read the first part.) So, ...

Hi, Light! Finally, another chapter. :D And the plot steadily plods on. There's less excitement in this chapter, but that's probably a good thing since a bunch of stuff just ...

Yay, they're free! Also wow, I can't believe this is the last one you have out so far. What am I going to review now? :P This part: "F-Felistia?" Zoltar ...

Hey there, I'm back again. :D So... I hate to be really nitpicky, but do they really have to fly through the maze? Couldn't they fly around it, or if ...

What's this? Two reviews in one day? Astonishing, I know. :P Okay, so I really like how everything's not all fine and dandy when Zoltar gets back, how there's a ...