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Hey there! I figured I'd drop back for another review. Honestly, this is written quite well. I really enjoy the interactions between the characters. Curi in particular is a pretty ...

Hey, I'm back again! There was one big thing I didn't believe about this chapter, and that had to do with Devin's injury. I'm not an expert, but apparently gut ...

Okay, I'm really into this story. I read halfway through this and went back to read the first chapters for context, and I think I'm hooked. So, you do a ...

Hey there! I thought I'd go ahead and give this a quick review. I want to insult it. Badly. I just wanted to say this was great because it immediately ...

Hey there! I thought I'd drop by to review this. So this is a cool way to do a story, instant messaging back and forth. I think it works pretty ...

Hey there! I saw that this has been hanging out in the Green Room for a while and I thought I'd come review it. Also, I apologize in advance for ...

Hey there! I noticed this has been sitting in the Green Room for a while, and I thought I'd swing by to review this. So, the first thing I noticed ...

Hey, I'm back! So this is a nice kind of transistion chapter - it's great to get to see them all interact and just kind of have fun together. Shiraku ...

Hey StormCycle! I saw this hanging out in the Green Room and thought I'd come review it. Honestly, I don't know the exact requirements of the assignment, but I'd guess ...

Hey there! I thought I'd drop by with a review today. I went ahead and read your (edited) first chapter before reading this one. So, I like this already. You've ...

Hey there! I remember reviewing one of these before, so I thought I'd take a look at this one too. Honestly, I really liked this one. Adding the second person ...

Hey birk! I noticed the second part of this was sitting in the Green Room and thought I'd come give it a review. (I did read the first part.) So, ...

Hi, Light! Finally, another chapter. :D And the plot steadily plods on. There's less excitement in this chapter, but that's probably a good thing since a bunch of stuff just ...

Yay, they're free! Also wow, I can't believe this is the last one you have out so far. What am I going to review now? :P This part: "F-Felistia?" Zoltar ...

Hey there, I'm back again. :D So... I hate to be really nitpicky, but do they really have to fly through the maze? Couldn't they fly around it, or if ...