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All right, let's dive into this. (You may have noticed I read the whole thing. Oops? :P Also tag me for future chapters because I'm so into this.) (Also, sorry ...

Hey there! I'm here for a quick review on this fine Review Day. First off, welcome to the site! I hope you're enjoying it so far, and I apologize that ...

Hey there! I thought I'd drop by for a quick review on this Review Day. This is such a short chapter that I'm not sure how much critique I'll be ...

Hey there! I thought I'd drop by for a quick review on this Review Day. So, this is supposed to be an intense, suspenseful scene as Malachi creeps through the ...

Hey there! I'm back for a review on this lovely Review Day! This is also a fairly good chapter. I particularly like how you explore Hal's thoughts (or lack thereof) ...

Hey there, Feltrix! I'm here for a quick review on this fine Review Day and I hope you'll forgive me for not having read the previous parts of this. I ...

And I'm back for another review this lovely Review Day! This is another pretty smooth part. I must say, I think it's kind of funny that you censor the swearing, ...

Hey there, I'm here for a quick review on this Review Day. So, this is dark, but I suppose that is the point. In terms of plot, pacing, and flow, ...

Hey there! I thought I'd drop by for a quick review this Review Day. This is really good so far. Your narration is smooth and very easy to read, and ...

Hey there! I thought I'd go ahead and review the next part of this. Story Wow, we get a lot of information in this chapter. I feel really bad for ...

Hey there! I thought I'd drop by for a quick review this lovely Review Day! I went ahead and read through Part 1, and now I'm here to review this ...

Oh. Oh, wow. I... wasn't expecting that. I really wasn't expecting Haka to actually beat the Master, but I wasn't expecting him to be so severely injured either. And Aleveri ...

Hey there! I thought I'd drop by today to rescue this chapter part from the Green Room. Aww. This chapter is really sweet, and I don't even need to read ...

All right, the final part. The fight scene between Avery and Meilikki wasn't nearly as smooth as the fight scene in the last chapter. I had a much harder time ...

Alright, let's get to this one. The first scene with Arthur and Nyx's mother was really interesting when I first read it because I assumed that Arthur would turn out ...