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Re: Conduit [Chapter 4][1st draft]
Hey there Wyvryn! I believe I actually remember reviewing previous parts to this, so I'm glad I'm able to come in with a bit of a working knowledge of what's ...
Jul 1, 2018 -
Re: Of the Forest: Chapter 2, Kark for You! (part 2)
Oh yay, the assailant and Aaron aren't the same person! I'm really glad and I like Aaron a lot better now. I thought that the time it took for him ...
Jul 1, 2018 -
Re: Of the Forest: Chapter 2, Kark for You! (part 1)
Hey Ryan! I thought I'd drop by for a quick review this lovely Review Day. From the start, I could tell this was written really pretty well. I felt grounded ...
Jul 1, 2018 -
Re: Bitter Oracle - Chapter 11 - What about Kyle Murphy?
Hey there papillote! I'm back like I said I might be - let's get this out of the Green Room. :) I really liked this chapter, especially the first part. ...
Jul 1, 2018 -
Re: Bitter Oracle - Chapter 10 - Slow Evening
Hey there papillote! I thought I'd drop by for a quick review on this lovely Review Day. :) I wanted to say - thanks for the bit of summary at ...
Jul 1, 2018 -
Re: Alpha - 4
Hey there! I thought I'd drop by for a quick review this lovely review day! Apologies for not having read previous parts First off, although you're not dividing this into ...
Jul 1, 2018 -
Re: Chapter 18.2: Ilami
Hey Light! I'm back again as always, and this time on Review Day! (Also, we need to just hang out and chat sometime. Message me on Discord if you see ...
Jul 1, 2018 -
Re: Fox Who Stole Her Name 1.2
Hey Lauren! Times like these are when I go consult that lovely article :P This is lovely - I really like the atmosphere and the thoughtful tone of the piece, ...
Jul 1, 2018 -
Re: Bridging Ch 01
Hey there, Wizard! I thought I'd drop by for a quick review this Review Day. We'll see if I can add anything to Rache's review. :P First off, I agree ...
Jul 1, 2018 -
Re: Wingless: The Nth of Tails
Hey there, Cloud! I thought I'd drop by for a quick review on this lovely review day. First off, what I really liked about this piece was the imagery. You ...
Jul 1, 2018 -
Re: Dynamica: Virtual Escape Ch. 2
Heyo! I thought I'd drop by for a quick review of this on this lovely Review Day. Overall, you have a great start so far! The journal format is interesting ...
Jul 1, 2018 -
Re: The Tale of Ye'Dunn: A TBB Tale
Hey there FantasyWriter! I thought I'd drop by for a really quick review today. I like the framing of this, because I think mythology of different worlds is really cool, ...
Jun 25, 2018 -
Re: A Broken Light
Hey there! I thought I'd drop by for a quick review. Overall, this was a pretty good story! It's a fairly typical zombie story, but not bad at all. I ...
Jun 15, 2018 -
Re: 13 Blackberries (Part 2)
Hey there! I thought I'd drop by for a quick review today. Apologies if I repeat anything that was previously said. I did read the last part, so I'll be ...
Jun 15, 2018 -
Re: Sucked into a black hole prologue
Hey there, Prachi! I thought I'd drop by for a quick review today, and hopefully I'll be able to build on shaniac's already excellent review. I like how you clearly ...
Jun 14, 2018