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A Broken Light

by WendyVermillion


A Broken Light

Sharrkan

The forest ended just over the dead—grassy hill. And like everything around the two travellers, it was dead silent. The only sound was the thudding of their footsteps on the long-dead earth.

“How much farther to the next town?” Sharrkan asked, glaring over the horizon of meadow he had yet to traverse, his hand held over his eyes shielding them from the sun.

“Not far, just across this field,” Yamuraiha replied, the barest glance above the big map she held, their only means of direction. Yamuraiha’s aqua-blue hair was thrown over her shoulder, a ripped and dirty witch hat resting on her head.

They’d been together at school when it happened—when the world went to hell. Everything did. Cities nothing more than dust in the wake of the things ahead. The living dead roamed the world now—but Yamuraiha called them Specters. She said zombies sounded stupid. They took everything. To find another person—or even a house that hadn't been ransacked and raided—was rare in this hell-bent world. Two years had already passed, Yamuraiha’s notebook full of ticks that marked their days.

Their trek continued over the rolling hills of dead grass. Just like how all the people died in the world, everything else had, too. Sharrkan hadn’t changed, though, even if everything around him did. That was what he thought, anyway.

“How much longer do you think?” Yamuraiha asked almost impatiently. The two had been walking around the world for the longest time, travelling here and there, so Sharrkan could understand if she were impatient. Still looking for other people, they had only happened across some. And nearly all of them were crazed to the edge of insanity. And even sometimes that he and Yamu were travelling, she broke down, too. But always the next morning, she hid it well. Too well.

“Just across this field, didn’t you say? Don’t ask me! You have the map!” He retorted, flinging his arm at the map Yamuraiha held close to her.

“Well I have the map, but I don’t know how long it’ll take!” She yelled back, though careful to keep her voice down.

The pair launched into a heated argument as usual. It was nothing new, especially with having to spend their time with each other every day for the past two years. It had been rough, escaping that hell of a school and making it out of the city. After they made their escape, the government tried to ease everyone by sending them out of the country. But the trucks they boarded bound for the airport were attacked, overrun by Specters. He had found Yamuraiha crouched down and hiding in the overturned vehicle, a hand over her mouth to keep the sobs from coming out. When Sharrkan pulled her from the ground, Yamuraiha had only fallen again, crying for what seemed like forever. They were lucky not to have been found out there on the open road.

Thinking back on that now, it was a lot worse than the present. Walking through the empty world beside her, their arguing that probably carried all the way across the field. But Sharrkan didn’t shush her, because he wanted to hear her voice. The melody that the wind carried even to the foul creatures that had taken everything.

Over the next hill they crossed, Sharrkan could have sworn he heard something. Yamuraiha let out a breath. There below them, lay a deserted ghost town—what seemed like even the ghosts had left.

“Do you think anyone is there?” Yamuraiha asked, pausing their argument, pointing a frail finger at the rubble of a town below.

Rubbing the back of his neck, he said, “probably not, but there might be food.” Sliding down the hill to the muddy waters of the swamp surrounding the town, Sharrkan looked around for anything to get to the land in front of him. Rice fields surrounded the town, assuming that was what had grown there.

“Are you coming or not?” Sharrkan said, glancing behind him at Yamuraiha who was still standing on the grass before the town.

“Y-yeah, I’m coming, you baldy.” She hissed, her light backpack bounded on her back as she dashed to him on the thin walkway between the patches of water. He didn’t understand her hesitation, really, they had entered so many villages and cities it was hard to recall now, but every time they did, Yamuraiha would always hesitate.

There wasn’t a soul on the streets, empty and barren. Toppled vendor stands and run-down cars littered the streets.

“It’s getting dark, we should find some food and a place to stay,” Sharrkan suggested to his partner. Yamuraiha’s loose and muddy robe outfit flowed around in the slight breeze in the streets. Sharrkan never knew exactly what it was that she wore, but she seemed to like it so he didn't complain.

He wore some questionable things, too, kind of like her robe but with a muscle shirt underneath. So they were both equally as weird. Fine.

“I think that’s a convenience store over there,” Sharrkan pointed to a building that looked the same as the rest, “there might be something there.”

The air was cold, just like that day everything started. It had been snowing, and Sharrkan and Yamuraiha had skirted the edges of the city in hopes of finding some other survivors. Their hopes had been dashed, however, and they found only more Specters. They chased them around the buildings, in the fields, through the forests until the pair had lost them, and tired from hunger and exhaustion, they’d slept in a tree.

Sharrkan didn’t understand why he was thinking about that day like this. Maybe it was the whole, life flashing before your eyes, thing and he was going to die soon. But at least that would be a change from this everyday boring life.

The convenience store’s doors had already been torn down, either by the foul creatures that roamed the world or other living scavengers.

Sharrkan raised his sword—the one he took from the school dojo he went to every day for his kendo practice—and Yamuraiha upholstered her Glock. They didn’t necessarily want to use the gun, otherwise, it would attract more attention then they wanted. Those Specters were blind. But they could hear everything. From the dropping of a pin to surely their footsteps that had marked the lands behind them.

Sharrkan was pulled from his train of thoughts when he heard Yamu scream. Her shriek echoed through the empty streets outside the shop, and following it the sharp sound of gunfire.

“Yamu! What are you doing?!” Sharrkan yelled, vaulting over overturned shelves over to the back room where the witch had been scavenging.

From beyond the wall, Yamuraiha screamed again—but unlike the last—it was of pain. Sharrkan rounded the last corner before he got a glimpse of Yamuraiha firing her Glock repeatedly from behind a fallen shelf, aimed at the oncoming Specters.

Sharrkan dispatched them with nothing more than a few swings of his sword. The rotten and decaying bodies crumpling to the floor, their heads rolling around on the messy ground.

“Yamu! What were you doing?!” He panicked, kneeling beside the witch he called a partner. “You could have been killed!” Sharrkan’s mind was a wild mess. He didn’t even notice as she slipped into the secluded room without him, leaving him to go on her own.

Before Sharrkan could say anything else, Yamuraiha pulled her knees to her chest and held her hat over her head. Quiet tears slid down her cheeks as Sharrkan only watched in silence. He’d never seen Yamu cry even after an attack like that. Recalling that much, Sharrkan had never seen her cry.

Neither of them said anything as Sharrkan wrapped his arms around her, engulfing her tiny figure. He could feel Yamuraiha tense but relax after a second passed. Not a minute could have escaped their grasp before Sharrkan stood up, pulling Yamuraiha with him.

“It's not safe here.” He said, pulling her by the hand out of the room.

Before they could take a step out of the room, Yamuraiha stopped. Nothing more than a little tug on Sharrkan’s arm.

“I can’t go.”

Sharrkan looked at her in confusion. If they didn’t go, they’d be caught in a wave of Specters that must have heard the gunshots. When Sharrkan tried to pull her out the door again, Yamuraiha resisted again.

“I can’t go.” She said again, her voice a monotone of pain.

“Why?” Sharrkan asked her, turning around to face her. Their hands still intertwined.

Yamuraiha didn’t say anything as she held her other arm out, the one she had been keeping behind her back that Sharrkan had failed to notice.

“What’s wrong with that?” Sharrkan asked, gesturing to the small gash on Yamuraiha’s forearm, belittling it. “It’s just a scratch.”

Yamuraiha retracted her outstretched arm, holding it closer to herself, caressing it.

“I didn’t scratch myself. The Specter did.”

Sharrkan’s mouth twitched a bit in disbelief, denying what he thought was most likely true.

“It’s just a scratch,” he said again, “it’ll heal.”

Yamuraiha stretched her arm out again, turning the gash skywards.

“No, it won’t,” she said, seething through her teeth as Sharrkan grabbed her arm. “Look.”

Yamu pointed to the hole in her skin, the fresh blood from only seconds ago was dried up, and the edges of the gash was a sickening greenish-grey. Sharrkan flinched at the sight but didn’t let go if her arm.

“It’s just a scratch,” he said for the third time, “it’ll get better later when we patch it up.” His mouth twitched again, denying his own thoughts—what he already knew.

“It won’t and you know it,” Yamuraiha lashed, ripping her arm from his grasp. “We’ve seen it happen. We’ve seen it happen to them. I’m going to end up the same.”

As Yamuraiha mentioned their friends, Sharrkan pulled her into another hug. This time, Yamu fought back, trying to get away from him.

With a heavy heart, Sharrkan rested his head on Yamuraiha’s, smoothing down her blue tresses of hair, soothing her sobs and tears.

“Let's just go. We have to find somewhere else.”

Sharrkan lead them to another abandoned building, what might have been a hospital. There were numerous rooms, all of them as empty as the pairs’ hearts. Sharrkan lead the way to the topmost floor, Yamuraiha behind him. Nearly to the top, Sharrkan heard the low—menacing steps of a Specter.

Three to my right, another on the left. On any other day, he’d have been able to lop their heads off or put a blade in their heart, but with Yamuraiha to watch? Just a minor inconvenience.

“Stay here,” he said to her, her head sagging on her shoulders. “I’ll be right back.”

He felt like something had been ripped from him as he stepped away from Yamuraiha who he’d left on the floor. His sword was strapped to his back, and as he ripped it out of its sheath, he looked back at Yamu.

Her eyes were starting to sink in. Her fair skin—already so pale lightened further. It wouldn’t be long.

The Specters that we’re coming at him were fast, but he was faster. Fueled by anger and an empty heart, he slashed and hacked away at their rotten skin.

There in the midst of the carnage, he stalked back to the wall Yamuraiha lean on. Her head lolled to her side, her waterfall hair and a blanket over her face.

“Yamu? We have to go.” He pleaded, gently nudging her cheek.

She’s so cold, he thought to himself. Her chest rose up and down faintly, and he took it as a good sign.

“Sharrkan, just go. It’s fine. It feels like I’m already gone.” Yamuraiha drawled, her head lolling to the other side, eyes rolling to the back of her head.

“No, no, no, we’re going now—” Sharrkan bundled her sagging body into his arms and began walking to the emergency stairs, “—and you’re going to be fine.” He said, trying to be optimistic.

The flight of stairs reached as far as the roof, but Sharrkan felt that Yamuraiha wouldn’t want to lay on the ground in her state. He stopped at the second-topmost floor, the hallways as blank and bleak as the rest he’d seen. He took a right into the hall, and another into a room.

Unlike all the other rooms he’s seen in the hospital, this one was slightly different. Lion stickers and large hospital beds filled with stuffed animals filled the room. Though only two beds, the room felt small. The toys scattered on the floor around him were kicked away as he made his way to one of the beds.

“Just stay there, I’ll be back.” He said, letting Yamuraiha down softly below the covers. Her hair bloomed around her like a flower, and the blood that now seeped from her eyes were her tears.

“Where are you going?” Yamu asked, snagging his sleeve as he turned away. Sharrkan looked back at her and made the bad decision of looking her in the eyes. They were bloodshot, blood running down her pale cheeks like the tears she’d shed earlier.

“To get some—” The toy car Sharrkan stepped on slid out from under him, crashing to the ground. Something clicked, looking beside him, Sharrkan could see a tape laying on the ground under the bed, it’s negatives rolling in its case.

The other night dear, as I lay sleeping

I dreamed I held you in my arms

But when I awoke, dear, I was mistaken

So I hung my head and I cried

The song was an old nursery rhyme, Sharrkan remembered it from when he was a child. Looking back at Yamuraiha on the bed, she let out a tired sigh.

You are my sunshine, my only sunshine

You make me happy when skies are gray

You'll never know dear, how much I love you

Please don't take my sunshine away

Sharrkan almost scoffed at the words of the song, wondering why he hadn’t shut it off yet.

“You are my sunshine. . . My only sunshine. . . ”

His eyes shot up to Yamuraiha, her lips forming the barest of words. Tears slipped from his face, matching the streaks of red on hers. He sat on the bed, his weight forcing a creak from the old and worn frame.

I'll always love you and make you happy

If you will only say the same

But if you leave me and love another

You'll regret it all someday

That sounded so much like Yamu, it made Sharrkan laugh. Yamuraiha looked at him, taking her attention off of whatever she had been looking at—or not been.

“Why are you laughing?” She asked, her mouth spraying the slightest of blood. Sharrkan wiped it away with a finger, leaning down to plant a kiss on her soft lips.

“Nothing.” He said. Because they didn’t need words to understand what they both felt. What they both knew was to come.

You are my sunshine, my only sunshine

You make me happy when skies are gray

You'll never know dear, how much I love you. . .

“Please don't take my sunshine away.” Yamuraiha’s voice cracked, and she was seized with a coughing fit of blood. The once-white sheets around her were splattered with crimson bright blood, it’s silent glow fading with the seconds passed.

“Don’t say anything.” Sharrkan pleaded, touching his forehead to hers, their hands grasping as tight as they could. But for Yamuraiha, it was little more than a light squeeze.

“Now, before it’s too late.” She said, the fire in her chest growing hotter with every second passed.

“No, wait. . .” Sharrkan said, savouring every last moment he had with her. As if there was a clock, ticking in the background, Sharrkan could see the seconds she had lest ticking away on her face. And if he didn’t do this now, he’d be gone, too. But was that really so bad? He’d be free of this hellish world, and maybe in another world with Yamuraiha.

The quiet slide of his sword against his sheath was all he could hear, it only added to the clock ticking away in the background.

Yamuraiha closed her eyes, her hand tightening all she could around his.

“Some people would call this a hell, I call it my story.”

The blade came down on her chest, a stake in her heart that had loved him so. Even if neither of them had said it before, they both knew, because they didn’t need words, didn’t need a light to guide them to each other. But he still uttered the words that would be the last she ever heard.

“I love you.”


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Sat Jun 23, 2018 2:05 pm
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Thanks for shharing very interesting story about a Zombie apocalypse. I usually don’t like such stories because they tend to be repetitive and predictable. But this one I enjoyed very much. I really like how you emphasize the relationship between the protagonists so that their deep love for each other is firmly established in the reader’s mind as the conclusion approaches.

The part that really grabbed me most was the song "You are my sunshine" as Yamu gradually succumbed to the disease that was transmitted to her by the zombie scratch on her arm. Very touching, especially as she gradually faded before his eyes and she struggled to hold on the the last vestiges of humanity she had left,. Then that final bittersweet hug before he had to kill her. The last words were sheer genius! Absolutely magnificent story-telling ability my friend!

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Watch those em dashes. They can distract.

[The forest ended just over the dead—grassy hill.]

The em dash pause seems to abrupt. A comma would be better here.

. . . . it was dead silent

I prefer deathly instead of “dead”because it seems more fitting, if that makes any sense.
https://www.thefreedictionary.com/deathly

travellers, [travelers,]

You have the map!” He retorted, . . . .
[You have the map!” he retorted, . . . .]


. . . . he had yet to traverse, . . . . [Seems too pompous.]

As a reader I would have preferred her to be called Yamu from the start. Her long name is hard to read and to pronounce and made me pause until I gave up trying.

Yamu is referred to as a witch but we are never told why. As a reader I wanted to know why she has blue hair and chose to wear that hat. If indeed it doesn’t matter to the story then it should not be mentioned since then it adds nothing but a quandary, if that makes any sense.

Adding color to the hat and describing exactly how it was dirty would have been nice. Was it mud-stained? Was it splattered with dried blood? How does dead grass look? Where on Earth, if it is on Earth, are they exactly? Mentioning a landmark would readily let the reader know.

Also adding texture to her hair, such as wavy, frizzy, or curly, would have been nice as would have been color of eyes and skin. Otherwise the reader must fill in the blanks with whatever or just see nothing at all.

All in all a very nice read. Looking forward to reading more of your work.






If you're a bit confused about Yamuraiha's name and references to her, this is a fanfiction and most people I would have already thought would know why, sorry.

Thank's for the review, I'm definitely going to take these suggestions into consideration! And a lot of the suggestions you made I have already changed but I just didn't edit this one. I'm usually more active on wattpad so that's where I do most of the editing and stuff.



Radrook says...


True! I should have looked at the category and seen it was fan fiction. My apologies.





That's ok, still grateful that you've spent the time to read my story!



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Sat Jun 16, 2018 1:48 am
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Hey there! I thought I'd drop by for a quick review.

Overall, this was a pretty good story! It's a fairly typical zombie story, but not bad at all. I apologize that I have no idea what anime (right?) this is fanfiction of, but hopefully my comments will be helpful anyway.

I think you could trim down the middle a bit, particularly from the time after you finish explaining why they're traveling to when Yamuraiha gets the scratch. It just sort of dragged for me. I didn't really care about their arguing and thought it took too long to get to the point where they were in danger.

I also thought you could make the explanation of what happened in the zombie apocalypse a bit shorter. Everyone knows broadly the story of the zombie apocalypse - you don't need to go into *that* much detail. Instead, what would be good to add is some explanation of where the characters are - normally I'd assume America, but from their names I'm guessing Japan? It's really not clear, and I think it needs to be clear, because (as someone who has lived in both countries) wandering around America (and where in America? America is huge) after a zombie apocalypse would be very different from wandering around Japan after a zombie apocalypse.

One small nitpick - I felt like the description of their clothes doesn't make any sense. Sure, maybe they have weird taste, but if the spend all day every day walking around outside without any protection from the elements... they're going to be looking for sturdy, sensible, outdoor clothing, not robes and muscle shirts they'd be really uncomfortable in.

I liked the ending a lot. It's a little bit cliche in several ways, but you made it work well with the story. One thing I thought wasn't clear was if Sharrkan was planning on killing himself after killing her - that could add a whole other layer of tragedy.

And I think that's all I've got for this! Let me know if you have any questions about anything I said. Good luck, and keep writing!






Ohhh killing Sharrkan, sounds even more tragic than I planned ;). Thanks for the review, I really do take all the advice reviewers give me to heart and use it. I don%u2019t change anything on YWS because I find it very troublesome, but I%u2019ll probably change things on my Wattpad a bit more. Thank you!!



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You're welcome! I'm glad I could help.



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Mon Jun 11, 2018 11:08 pm
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Hi NafaKitty here for a review!

"The forest ended just over the dead—grassy hill."

There is no need for the hyphen here, I would recommend replacing it with a comma. The hyphen interrupts the flow.

"The only sound was the thudding of their footsteps on the long-dead earth."

The same as before, replace the hyphen with a comma.

"...his hand held over his eyes shielding them from the sun"

This flows weird to me. I think it might sound better if maybe you said something along the lines of: "his hand shielded his eyes from the sun".

"Upholstered" should be "Unholstered" or "Took her glock out of its holster."

"Recalling that much, Sharrkan had never seen her cry"

He was literally just thinking about the day the "spectres" appeared and how she was sobbing in the middle of the road?

"...her voice a monotone of pain"

Monotone means in one tone, it doesn't really fit here. I would say "Her voice laced with pain." or something similar.

"He stopped at the second-topmost floor,"

So did he go down a flight then since they were on the top floor a moment ago? If they went down a flight of stairs why was he talking about going to the roof?

When you do lyrics or something of the sort, put it in quotations or italics to set it apart from everything.

I would also like to point out that I'm pretty sure it's spelled "Yamraiha" if this is a fanfiction for Magi, which I'm almost positive it is.

It was an interesting concept, and then end was cool.

Like I said, I wouldn't use hyphens as much as you did in here. It interrupts the flow. There are also a few typos that a simple and quick proofread would fix.






Thanks for the review! I usually edit for spelling most of the time, then kind of just post it without a care. I should probably stop that. Thanks for reviewing!




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