Mayfyre

This is really cool :D I loved it, especially: "For jelly-red blood has spattered the fields, clinging like beads to the lettuce lips, perfuming the air with salty cells, saturating ...

I quite liked this, it definitely put a smile on my face because of its silly (in a good way) topic and the sheer randomness of a toad stealing lip ...

I thought that was a bit weak to be honest, but don't give up on it yet. With a subject that disturbing the reader should cringe in horror about the ...

I had to read this several times to figure out whether or not I like it, but I really do. I think the whole concept is quite strong and even ...

This is a good start. Writing about some one's eyes without using cliches is quite hard, but I think you had quite an original approach with the imagery that was ...

Wow, I really liked this. The imagery is incredible and create a great atmosphere. I especially liked: "Your shop is a birthmark hidden between forgotten streets, and I am the ...

I'm really impressed. This must be one of the most charming poems I've ever read. Your rhyme is simple, never forced and flows very nicely. The topic is absolutely sweet ...

That is brilliant, I really loved (almost) every bit of it :D, though I might join in with the repeated stabbing of the last line :wink: The idea for the ...

I liked this (maybe because I've got a thing for pirates and ships :wink: ) and it was fun to read. I especially liked: "The water-worn wood. Rough and splintered, ...

I liked this a lot, the idea is beautiful and some of the imagery is very powerful. What I liked best was the last two lines: "Eyes and shadows stuck ...

In a way I quite liked the poem... in another way I didn't. Romeo and Juliette is definitely good material and you had some good ideas, but I think (as ...

Hey there :) I liked the idea of the poem. "Sitting in a sea full of people" is a good metaphor and a strong image (Though you could leave away ...

I absolutely loved the idea and it was pulled off well. Some bits were not really flowing quite right, but you getting there. "...for you see, such a great person ...

I liked this a lot and for some reason it reminds me of Carol Ann Duffy, she has the some sort of ironic style. Irony in poetry is sometimes quite ...

I really enjoyed this, a very strong topic originally handled. My favourite bits are the whole of the first stanza (which is just generally great regarding choice of wording and ...