Okay, so here I am. Actually, you have made the perfect review yourself: "The structure is a little random, but I liked it." And that's exactly what I'm going to say, too.
Bit by bit
I gave myself to you.
Three Michelin stars.
Strange menu.
This is my favourite stanza, which is good, because it's the first one. I especially liked the Michelin stars bit. Only I think there should be an "a" before the "strange menu". You know, an article? But it's basically the only nit-pick in the whole poem. So well done, mate.
Hope to see you around!
Demeter xx
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