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  • Poetry » Romantic, Narrative Re: Breaking Up With Imaginary You

    Thanks for the review! Im glad you liked the poem. I agree that I think we as humans have a tendency to make up characters in our heads that aren%u2019t ...

    Jun 13, 2021
  • Poetry » Romantic, Narrative Re: Breaking Up With Imaginary You

    Thanks for the review! I will make the grammatical changes!

    Jun 13, 2021
  • Poetry » Romantic, Narrative Re: Breaking Up With Imaginary You

    Thanks for the review! What you said about it sounding like it%u2019s out of a diary was insightful, because I literally wrote it in my diary, XD, and then decided ...

    Jun 13, 2021
  • Poetry » Humor, Romantic Re: What love feels like

    You expected some deep philosophical poem, and the poem exceeded expectations I can imagine. Before and since this poem I have never been struck by the muse as so. This ...

    Apr 30, 2021
  • Poetry » Romantic, Other Re: I didn’t have FOMO until I met you

    Haha, thanks, this poem isn't a perfect analogue for my current situation, but it's close XD.

    Apr 23, 2021
  • Poetry » Romantic, Other Re: I didn’t have FOMO until I met you

    Haha, thanks, I get you, I'm crap at poetry, better at monologing. Really, all the poetry i write is just monologue in weird style, but maybe i should try branching ...

    Apr 22, 2021
  • Poetry » Romantic, Other Re: I didn’t have FOMO until I met you

    Thanks for the feedback! I'm glad you liked it! I'll make those changes!

    Apr 21, 2021
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Lokiverse

    Y'all be like, "My name is Legion, for we are many."

    Apr 8, 2021
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Humor Re: The Best Poem

    I like how you now know if I wrote a poem it probably wasn't serious And hey, on April fools, the rules don't apply. Well, you know the rules, and ...

    Apr 4, 2021
  • Short Story » Literature, Narrative Re: Untethered

    Thanks a ton for the review! I'm glad you liked it, the idea of living lives through others has captivated me for a long time, and though writing this story ...

    Apr 2, 2021
  • Novel / Chapter » Dramatic, Politics Re: America Gone - Chapter Two (Revised)

    Muahaha, I wonder how many works I've messed up by slipping cookies into them...

    Mar 26, 2021
  • Short Story » Literature, Narrative Re: Untethered

    Thanks a ton for your review! I will address those problems! to answer your two questions, 1. I should have explained this better, and I hope now that I've edited ...

    Mar 25, 2021
  • Short Story » Literature, Narrative Re: Untethered

    Thanks for the review! I agree, the ending needs editing. It's supposed to be one of those things the author never says but the reader just realizes, but evidently I ...

    Mar 25, 2021
  • Short Story » Literature, Narrative Re: Untethered

    Oops, gave you the points before I read the end of the review XD. Thanks a ton for the review! You raised many great points and I will make those ...

    Mar 24, 2021
  • Other » Humor, Realistic Re: How To Take Writing Notes Like A God

    Thanks! Both of these work have trick titles Oopsy Maybe I should start making real stuff and stop just messing around with my works XD

    Feb 24, 2021


Fairy Tales are more than true; not because they tell us that dragons exist, but because they tell us that dragons can be beaten.
— G.K. Chesterton