MaxZero1496

Well, this is really cool! Good luck with your journalism class! Just a few mistakes that I saw: 1. Line one, journalism misspelled. 2. Line five, freshman misspelled. 3. And ...

Great Job! Don't see any huge mistakes, I just have a few suggestions. In paragraph five, should it maybe say "completing the song" instead of "completing the phrase"? The only ...

Really good. Fall is the most colorful season. Only caught a few mistakes: Second stanza, should be whose instead of who's. Its possessive doesn't require a apostrophe. That's in each ...

Awesome! Really good. Just a few mistakes I caught..flying into a bottomless pit, flying is lacking the "i". And second, in the first paragraph, ourselves has a space after our. ...

First of all, very good! I never knew the story behind Edison's fear of the night. Just a few suggestions....one, I believe a period should go after "Mr", like Mr. ...

Really good. I love how the third line perfectly complements the second. The fourth line is a perfect juxtaposition to the second and third. You captured the mood of depression ...

Very, very good. I've made poetry before, but you can express yourself much easier than I can. Amazing! One question, however. In line 13, shouldn't it be the chirp of ...