Mattie

Chapter 5: Q & A Renee walked along the line of lockers in the school courtyard. She had wondered where Shannon was until she saw her by her own locker ...

Chapter 4: Processing Shannon could feel her face burning, her hands clammy, and heart racing as she waited for Renee’s reaction. It was killing her. She swept her hair up ...

Chapter 3: Telling All Shannon sat across from Renee at the table. Mrs. Wilks was at the end. “So, where did you move from?” Mrs. Wilks asked as she pushed ...

Chapter 2: Only the Surface When Shannon looked at her, she knows what weakness is. The weakness a person can bring you, the slow movement, words unspokened, needs left in ...

Switchfoot's song, Learning to Breathe. Yeah, it is. I do feel that it doesn't all go together well, but I've been in such a writing mood, apart from the song, ...

You're the one who's sounding like a b***h. Sorry, but it's true. Like Sureal said, she does nothing that effects your daily life or you in any way. You let ...

Finally! THANK YOU Sureal! Someone finally sees my point and understands!

Oh, the day I had been crit I read this and it had a reference to over the rainbow in the title from the wizard of oz. Then I read ...

AHA! I get it! :)

I never said it was though. I was just pointing stuff out. I knew it was about a guy. What you wrote about him and her just didn't seem clear.

OMG...:)

"It has to be done? There's a law? I don't think so. Actually, you don't have to do homework if you don't want. I never do mine. I can do ...

Meshugenah- It doesn't matter if he wants to or not, I just said that it needs to be done. I may not want to do my homework, but I do ...

Hey again BW. I like this. It really works out and flows from beginning to end. I love the idea of your whole poem and can't wait to read more!

Hey FS. I love this! It flows together smoothly enough and I like your word choice as someone else said. Great work as always!