Matthews

Your flow and rhyme seem to be good, doesn't seem unnatural anywhere. I have NO IDEA what this poem is supposed to mean, AT ALL, so I really can't help ...

This is a beautiful narrative! It gave me a quiet, thoughtful feeling while reading it. The things that reside in the closet have long lost their original scents. Perhaps ‘twas ...

Even though this was cliche as others have pointed out, I still enjoyed reading it, and think you did a nice job. I agree that you should take out the ...

Creative piece. I didn't particularly enjoy too much myself, (personal taste) but it definitely was interesting. In the third line you say 'mostly that true? Is the larger part of ...

Nice! I like this topic a lot, and the imagery was good. The rhyme seemed to flow, and wasn't unnatural, so good job there. There were a few lines that ...

Not sure why this is called "Lady Justice" since it seems to me more about personal doubt and confusion. Anyway. It was an interesting poem. The first stanza starts out ...

Well, I'm not sure what this poem is supposed to mean, and still am not getting any clues after re-reading it, may just be me, but I really don't get ...

Hmm, interesting way of presenting your thoughts/views. I think you should tidy up the technical side of things, right off the bat. The black sheep is leaving , it was ...

Wow, this was soaked with emotion! I really, really could feel the emotion, and I would have thought 'friend' actually existed if I hadn't read the spoiler. This was something ...

This is cute, and I like that you made a poem about something silly and rather insignificant (someone finding a penny) into something fun and interesting. A little idea to ...

This is actually really nice. The boy thing at the end left me CON-FUSED, I mean, when did this become a love poem?! You're talking about life, and how everyone ...

Aw, this is cute and pretty. I like "Autumn is my home" at the end of each stanza. Autumn is my second favorite season, (I love spring). One thing I've ...

Hmm, interesting poem. It could definitely use some work, and all, but the feelings portrayed were something a lot of people can face and feel themselves. We all feel like ...

Oh wow, this is beautiful!!! I LOVE that you use music to compare to love. You've done a wonderful job, and as I am a musician and love music, and ...

Nice! It was short, to the point and had a great meaning and great ending. The flow was the main thing that threw me off. It really doesn't flow well ...