Matthews

Hmm, I like this...it's very fun to read, and gives a good view into what it's like going to homecoming or prom. It was neat. I actually don't know why ...

Hmm, this was very beautiful...and I enjoyed it. The only thing that bugged me was the rhyme scheme, as it often seemed forced, and half the time you don't rhyme. ...

Wow, this is very beautifully written! I'm impressed. It has a wonderful flow, had a lot of emotion, and was really touching. There are a few places where the punctuation ...

Wow, this was very beautiful and sweet. So cute! Not sure if that's how you wanted it to come off as, I was thinking "Aww," and it's truth too...although I ...

This was very good, and I enjoyed it. I have a couple nitpics though: 1) The huge gaps between every single line really annoyed me and threw me off. There ...

This was a very powerful and emotional poem, but you need to clean it up a bit. First off, the title is crappy...try to think of something that will 'interest' ...

Definitely an interesting poem. I agree that it felt drawn-out, and you can't help getting bored reading through it. It's very repetitious and any excitement and pity soon die out ...

Once, I ruled the oceans, And held the sky in my palm. Once, I kept the earth for me, and willed the fire calm. The animals obayed me, Each and ...

This is quite beautiful, and intriguing, although I found the meaning somewhat vague. I enjoyed it nonetheless, and will give you a quick review: First off, you should probably capitalize ...

Cute poem :) I enjoyed this, and I think you did a good job with the short length and it's just really a sensory piece. Great emotion and ends on ...

Hmm, I hate to feel like the bad guy here, but personally while I read this it felt almost like one big run-on. I couldn't take a breath to stop ...

Pretty good poem here! I enjoyed reading it, and the story was interesting and something a lot of people can relate to. Not necessarily 'moving schools' but leaving things behind, ...

Interesting poem. I personally don't believe in the concept of 'Mother Nature', but this was still a good poem that I could enjoy. Once, I ruled the oceans, You do ...

You kneel on the floor , tear s falling from your eyes. It's 'tears' otherwise it would become 'tear is', just like 'it's' becomes 'it is', and 'tear is' makes ...

OK, to me, it seems cute, and I like that it's short and tidy, and all, but what is the BASIS of it? What ARE you if you're not ordinary? ...