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  • Poetry » General, Other Re: Senseless Hope

    Its amazing how something so short can be so great.

    Jun 30, 2015
  • Short Story » Dramatic, General Re: Robbery

    Thank you so much for your help I really appreciate you taking time to read and review my work ! :)

    Jun 10, 2014
  • Poetry » General, Realistic Re: Dyslexia

    This is beautiful

    Jun 9, 2014
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Narrative Re: A night in hell...

    Thanks very much. Such positive feedback is always encouraging!

    Jun 1, 2014
  • Short Story » Other, General Re: My Name Is

    This is a really dark and mysterious piece. The personification was very good!

    May 18, 2014
  • Short Story » Other, General Re: My Name Is

    This is a really dark and mysterious piece. The personification was very good!

    May 18, 2014
  • Poetry » Romantic, Realistic Re: I hate you

    Hello there, sorry i'm new here so I haven't really done many reviews but anyway.. I thought this was a very good poem and i agree with chancesnchanges when they ...

    May 13, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Gracia

    This is brilliant! The first couple of sentences were really interesting and made me want to read more. These are really good first chapters to your story and i can't ...

    May 13, 2014
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Narrative Re: A night in hell...

    thankyou for your feedback :)

    May 13, 2014
  • Poetry » Action / Adventure, Narrative Re: Broomsticks: The Quidditch Tale

    May 12, 2014
  • Poetry » Action / Adventure, Narrative Re: Broomsticks: The Quidditch Tale

    Ahhhh I am guessing you are a Harry Potter Fan? :) I really enjoyed reading this! I particularly liked your use of similes and it would have been great if ...

    May 12, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, Dramatic Re: Confines I

    May 12, 2014
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Narrative Re: A night in hell...

    :) I have another short story opening that I am unsure about whether to post or not. Its just a draft. Do you think I should post it or keep ...

    May 12, 2014
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Narrative Re: A night in hell...

    Thank you very much for your feedback I will take that into consideration :)

    May 12, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, General Re: Renatus - chapter seven

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    wow

    May 11, 2014


Depression is messin with the wrong person over here cuz in the months that I was doing better I was sharpening my weapons for this war.
— Kaia