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  • Short Story » Dramatic, Humor Re: The English C

    :)

    Jan 29, 2014
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Humor Re: The English C

    Thanks Lava :)

    Jan 29, 2014
  • Poetry » Spiritual, Other Re: Why I believe in God.

    You misunderstand me. I am happy with my beliefs and fully understand why I believe. I was simply reviewing this as a poem, and highlighting what I believe to be ...

    Jan 29, 2014
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Humor Re: The English C

    It's not mean, it's your opinion. I am a firm believer in literary minimalism. See this link: A great writer doesn't need adjectives. And minimalism takes far greater effort than ...

    Jan 29, 2014
  • Lyrics » Dramatic, Horror Re: Song I wrote

    I like it. You should call it, Ode to Rainbows and Butterflies.

    Dec 10, 2013
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Narrative Re: The King's Gambit

    Oh, and how does "I'm getting ready to settle the score" sound instead of "I'm happier than I've been before"?

    Dec 6, 2013
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Narrative Re: The King's Gambit

    Thanks Nate. Best review I've received in a long time. :) On the first quote, I agree with the problem. I'll need to go fix up that line with something ...

    Dec 6, 2013
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Narrative Re: The King's Gambit

    Thank you :)

    Dec 6, 2013
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Narrative Re: The King's Gambit

    Thanks Erin :)

    Dec 6, 2013
  • Poetry » General, Romantic Re: A Love Poem from Bolt to Pickle

    You're welcome, pickle. Hope you and Bolt live happily ever after

    Jul 1, 2013
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Narrative Re: Perilous Technology

    Glad you liked it rishabh. Thanks :)

    Jun 26, 2013
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Narrative Re: Perilous Technology

    Thanks :) I'm glad you liked it.

    Jun 26, 2013
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Narrative Re: Perilous Technology

    Hey Audy, thanks for the great review! Regarding the interpretation, you're not far off: The tale is an exchange between Superman and Louis Lane. Louis Lane narrates her fears that ...

    Jun 25, 2013
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Narrative Re: Perilous Technology

    Thanks Andrea. Louis Lane is Superman's girlfriend, and Lex Luther is his evil nemesis.

    Jun 25, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: LOVE

    Hi umaima, As a forewarning, my review is going to be brutal, but only because I think it will help you improve as a writer. It will in all likelihood ...

    Mar 7, 2013


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